Sunday, April 01, 2012

Eager






(Image taken from here)

Close match ~ fingers crossed
heart beating fast, Eager for
moment ~ "Yes!! We've won!"


Written for Haiku Heights



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Tarang Sinha said...

Really nice haiku and very cute picture!:)

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Awesome photo and appropriate haiku ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

Chevrefeuille said...

Nicely done.

Grace said...

I can feel the excitement ... nice picture too ~

Bruce Miller said...

Really captures the childhood eagerness of reaching a goal -- c'mon please oh please let us win!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

A child's eagerness is contagious! I'm eager to "get going" again, just reading your words and seeing the photo!

Eager Wildflower

Enigmatic Soul said...

Reminds me of the final minutes of an intense game (football/cricket/wrestling - because that's all I watch, haha). I love that feeling, the climactic moments of anticipation and the burst of joy when your side wins. Great post. :)

Simran said...

Aww :)
So cute :)

Mama Zen said...

This is really cute!

wordcoaster said...

Loved it! Definitely can relate to the anxious eagerness expressed here :)

CYNOSURE said...

I've experienced such feelings...thanks for reminding those lovely days...
cute one rather... :) :) :)

Gemma Wiseman said...

Wonderful sense of excitement in your haiku complementing the idea of eagerness!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Tarang, Carol, Chevrefeuille,Grace,Bruce,Magical Mystical Teacher,Enigmatic Soul,Simi, Mama Zen,wordcoaster,Cynosure and Gemma :)

Chirag Joshi said...

lovely lines

 

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