Friday, April 15, 2011

Her heart still cries






Photo by Takemyworldapart

She pretends to be strong,
holding immense pain for so long
She masks her original side
though her heart is burning inside
She restrains those uncontrollable tears
through her bold and fake smiles
But if you look deeply into her eyes
You will notice that her heart still cries!!



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winds of time said...

Super valli :)

Valli said...

@winds of time
Thanks for the read

some unspoken words said...

loved ur stricken lines.. expressed beautifully

vaisakhi said...

lovely....there is so much i can writew here ryt now...could connct so deeply....but well m out of ryt words now...just loved it...:)

Fatima said...

lovely poem dear...the emotions expressed through these words are immense!

Good read...

Take Care.

Naaz said...

just like u wrote on me ..

Very sweet tho'

Cutie Pie (♥‿♥) said...

Itz tuf 2 luk deep into smeone'z Eyez whoz farAway ;) so gueZz u wud share dem...as i can neva makeit out :(

Valli said...

@some unspoken words
Thanks for the read
@vaisakhi
Oww....It's sad that you connect to this bitter poem....:(
thanks for the read
@Fatima..
Thanks re....:D
@Naaz..
You could relate to it na..:(
Sad :(

Valli said...

@QTie...^_^ so glad...you wanna look look into my eyes

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
well that was so beautifully penned...loved it...the end was so beautifully woven...nicew...real nice..

Regards,
The Silhouette...

Valli said...

Thanks for the read Eon

PRANEETH said...

Nuvvena aa "She"....

Anyway good one..Short and good..

Valli said...

Yeah Neeth...
Thanks for the read..:)

Valli said...

Yeah Neeth...
Thanks for the read..:)

Louise Hernan said...

That's so sad - and you're right - the eyes always give it away. Good job Valli!! :)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks Louise

... Madhumathi ... said...

Sad though..well xpressed..:)
I love your instant rhyming words :)

 

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