Wednesday, February 02, 2011

I'm just incomplete

Missing Piece
Photo by Jean Fan (JFotography)

I'm a butterfly with battered wings
I'm a violin with the broken strings
I'm a bell that never rings
I'm like an empty swaying swings
I'm a starless sky
I'm a truth within a lie
I'm the weakest link of the broken chain
I'm a terrible loss within a gain
I'm a rose that fades
I'm a color without any shades

I'm an unsolved puzzle
I'm a drop less drizzle
I'm a speechlessI parrot
I'm a missing card in a tarot
I'm a rainbow without colors
I'm a spring without flowers
I'm a dance which has no grace
I'm a song that has no steady rhythm or pace
I'm a smile less face
I'm an affection less embrace
I'm a toy that lost its charm and good look
I'm a word less empty notebook
I'm a journey that has no destination
I'm a survey that yields no estimation
I'm a greeting without a note
I'm an empty traveling boat
I'm a lock with the missing key
I'm a fruitless mango tree
I'm a conversation without a cheerful talk
I'm an empty blackboard without a mark of chalk
I'm an ornament that lost its shine
I'm a knot that does not combine
I'm an echo which has no replication
I'm a mirror which shows no reflection
I'm a vehicle that has no wheel
I'm an empty cassette that has no reel
I'm a poem that has no feeling
I'm a quote that has no meaning
I'm an artist who lost her skill
I'm an enthusiast who lost all her will
I'm dreamer who got lost in her way
I'm a poor girl who looks for stars in a day
I'm a girl who is still a mystery file
I'm a girl who lost her true smile

I am girl who is just Incomplete!!

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Pranab said...

WOW !!!!

Valli said...

Thanq Pranab

Fatima said...

That was a wonderful poem Valli...described the feeling of being and feeling incomplete beautifully !

Take Care,

Arslan said...

very nice i must say....

Deepika said...

Valli thats was beautifully written but to be honest is triggered the blues :(
was depressing and lacking hope.. I would just say- hope its a fiction and if its otherwise.. I wish the phase to pass over soon.. Take care buddy

Valli said...

ThanQ :)


Yeah...I'm in depressed writing such stuff...Thanks for your wishes dear...:)

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi
Well, sorry for being late.. :(

that was nicely written...the thought was beautiful...

Feeling the blues?? try to splash it out on the canvas...its so much better...

The Silhouette...

Valli said...

The Silhouette..:)

Ice said...

Wonderful - that what i could exclaim ! Beautiful thought flow conjured with words .. Although at times it just seemed that words could have woven in a more crisp way , yet the simplicity and direct-from-heart words covers it up ! Great work , keep going ! :)

Valli said...

ThanQ Ice..:)
My feelings are my inspiration to write..:)

sakhii•• said...

sad but superbbb!! :)

Valli said...

ThanQ Sakhii..:)

εﺓз♪♥In a Girl's Heart♥♪εﺓз said...

akka its awesome touched akka love u lot n lot...u may nt b incomplete fo u r gr8est inspiration for many of us muahhhhhhhhh

Valli said...

Haha...ThanQ Keerthana

Arpitha Holla said...

really nice poem.. :) :) and a very cute, sweet nice blog.. :) :)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks Arpitha :)

Blahblaholic ♥ © said...

This is *SO* beautiful. Beyond amazing.
WOW <3
Thanks for visiting my blog. Liked your Facebook Page, looking forward to reading more of awesometastic posts :D

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thank you so much blahblaholic :)
Thanks for following too :)

Anonymous said...

I think I might use this poem for an assignment at schoool, its so good and definiately what i'm looking for.

Surbhi Bafna said...

Wow!! Just a Wow :)

favrt- I'm a missing card in Tarot.
disagree- I'm a poem that has no feeling.
Comment- Superb analogies.
Query- How do you get such beautiful ideas along with such nice rhymes???


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Bushra said...

Beautiful expression of feelings:)

Jay Singh said...

Hi Valli,

Superb, a girl who feels incomplete finds solace in the comfort of these beautiful words strung together by you.

Loved this one :)


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Meoww said...

Oh, such a sad poem...

Vishal Rathod said...

Although I am your new follower , but this is not the way you write. As the name suggests something is missing and incomplete. And I feel that is your smile when you write from the soul. Any ways words and comparisons were awesome.

Anonymous said...

I have been reading your blog for a while and I like your writings interesting.

Panchali said...

In this poem you can feel the aura of - happiness!Lovely!

beingtwentysrishti said...

Nicely written but a really sad poem.

saikat mbka ghosh said...

everything is incomplete in this world !!!! and may be that what makes world unique !!!! perfectly in imperfect :D ,,,,nice poetry as always ,,hope u r in a much better joyfull mood now dan wen u wrote dis pensive poetry :)

flamesofthoughts said...

How, a girl who is all these things, can be 'just incomplete'? :). Indeed women are mystery. Beautifully written.

Himadri Singha said...

i always enjoy ur soothing music :))

aliasgarmukhtiar mukhtiar said...

nice read

Fayaz Pasha said...

Valli, I very much appreciate the poetic lines. However, I do think that there's no one incomplete. God has blessed every human being with so much abundance.

POOJA... said...

u always amazed me by ur poems...
so beautiful... :)

Geeta Lal said...

Its awesome, your magnified observation is flawless, you are blessed with an eye that beauty wishes for, I'll certainly take out time to read all your creativity.

sathish kumar said...

Master piece


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