Friday, December 24, 2010

One lost girl filled with delusion






(Image taken from here)

Nobody can understand me
What I'm going through they can never see
I don't know whether it's their fault or mine
But that's okay! It's all fine

I feel I'm the only one of a kind
with unique thoughts flowing in my mind
I don't know whether they are wrong or right
I'm looking for truth in my heart to gain insight

I'm misunderstood by everyone
I'm alone and cant blend with anyone
Like the floating oil on the water surface
Like an illusion of clouds reflection touching the river surface

When I pretend saying "Oh! I'm fine!"
Nobody can trace the pain hiding behind my eyes
I'm always there for myself, I am the only thing that is all mine
I realized this very lately , Because I wasn't that wise



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PRANEETH said...

First one to comment...



Good one Valli....
comparisions are good....


(one of the pic selection was Excellent...:P)

... Madhumathi ... said...

Loved it.. :) um.. :)

Nandu said...

Good one Valli....
comparisons are good....

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:P

Valli said...

Praneeth...ThanQ :)

Madhumathi...ThanQ :)

Nandu...ThanQ :P

Chocolate Lover said...

this one is just beautiful :)

kiran said...

expressed very well as usual...!! :)
evry one will be in their own world....!!dnt expect much..!!

we will b always with ourselves...!! :)..the best company...!!

Valli said...

Chocolate lover
ThanQ :)

Kiran
ThanQ :)
Yes...We ourselves are best company..:D

An Ordinary Gal said...

ohh dear...it was wonderfully expressed. Sometimes I feel the same.

Valli said...

ThanQ dear..:)

riggs said...

..wonderful piece of poetry..
..keep it up.. :) ;)

riggs said...

..behind every i am fine..is a heart filled wid confusion n pain.. :(

Valli said...

Correct!
Beautifully said Riggs!

Valli said...

ThanQ Riggs

Simran said...

So heart felt !
This feeling comes once for sure in everyone's life!

Lovely =)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks Simran :)

sowmya said...

very soulful poem :)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks Sowmya

 

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