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Lives like me
but feels not like me
Lifeless life
My shadow - It dances when I dance, it smiles when I smile, it runs when I run, does each and everything that I do all my life. But, it can never feel what I feel. Partial life of me! Another emotionless replica!! My forever friend to whom I am unknown!!!
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The best part is she remains with you till your last day !
Beautiful as usual.
Beautiful observation :) lovely :)
Beautifully etched on paper....shadows a part of us , devoid of all feelings..still a never gonna leave friend of us
But then again, it is a part of our lives :-)
Superb.
Shadow forms by blocking the path of Light(Truth)on an opaque(Maya) substance. Maya which takes a bath of truth so it can awaken the vibration of eternal force(life). So while Maya that is our body can feel but the shadow which blocks the path of truth is lifeless and can not respond to feelings.
yes indeed a forever friend ... and rightly mentioned lifeless and unknown and this lifeless eternal fren only leaves us when we are invisible and hence lifeless :)
nice thought .. very deep .. perfect Valli Style !!:)
Very true!
after long time you have written , was waiting for your post :)
Beautifully said Valli:)
good one.. and very true..
Beautifully conceived and expressed
What a wonderful and meaning Haiku Valli .
Travel India
Great thought Valli, a very intriguing one. Lifeless life is a very well said conclusion, you couldn't have said it better. LOVELY ONE dear..
What an intriguing thought!
What an amazing thought wish our shadows could talk and have feelings!
http://unshakenthoughts.com/2013/04/21/shadows/
May be she too feels but doesn't express the way you do...just a point of view...
I liked the way you have thought and created it...
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/i-stand-in-her-light.html
RS
Lovely exploration of the essence of a shadow!
Beautifully written ... Loved it !
Poor shadow!
Paradise in Shadows
Just a shadow. Good one.
Nicely done Valli!
Hank
Lovely poem and the image is so wonderful !
A few days back i hv written an article on same theme..and your Haiku reminded me to post on my blog....It is again a true fact you potrayed dear....loved this Haiku <3