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Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Tears of blood

Heart numb with sorrow;
A joy drop couldn't dilute
pain in tears of blood

Written for Haiku Heights

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zunnur said...: I can feel the pain; November 13, 2013 at 7:35 AM
Tarang Sinha said...: "A joy drop couldn't dilute the pain..." I liked this!
Be happy...always!:); November 13, 2013 at 1:57 PM
propelsteps said...: Appreciating and accepting pain as a part of life is true wisdom. Your words are so beautiful. Keep writing.; November 13, 2013 at 5:57 PM
shubham said...: lovely, and your music adds up...; November 13, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Nikhil said...: A sweet melancholous haiku indeed!:)
Well put!:); November 13, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Ankur Anand said...: nice n dark :); November 13, 2013 at 9:01 PM
Jyotsna Bhatia said...: Nice Haiku; November 13, 2013 at 11:55 PM
Jyoti Mishra said...: pain can do that to a person; November 14, 2013 at 9:26 AM
a Rat said...: painful...! good one.; November 14, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Veena said...: Pain the part of life if beautiful !!!!!
The music certainly adds up ..Be happy
Good Day Valli; November 14, 2013 at 11:07 AM
bagofbrains said...: Brilliant Valli... you are so good :) I could feel the pain.
take care and keep smiling; November 14, 2013 at 1:45 PM
indu chhibber said...: INTENSE FEELINGS IN MINIMUM WORDS-JUST GREAT!; November 14, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Paresh Kale said...: Good one !; November 14, 2013 at 8:08 PM
sathish kumar said...: aha! touched.; November 14, 2013 at 11:37 PM
Sumana Roy said...: strongly moving.........; November 17, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Designed by Vera said...: Beautiful...love the music!; November 18, 2013 at 5:13 AM
Rahul Bhatia said...: Moving, Valli!; November 18, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Usha Menon said...: What an insightful Haiku.; November 18, 2013 at 5:07 PM
Reading Pleasure said...: Beautifully Profound; November 18, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Reshma said...: When the heart is hurt, the pain is indeed unbearable...; November 19, 2013 at 5:41 AM
Enigmatic Soul said...: Wow. Beautiful.; November 19, 2013 at 12:48 PM
Shaila Parikh said...: Loved it... Awesome words.. Numbness is not silence.. its a chaos due to the turbulence of thoughts... actually; November 19, 2013 at 12:55 PM
Words N Me said...: Loved it... Awesome words.. Numbness is not silence.. its a chaos due to the turbulence of thoughts... actually; November 19, 2013 at 1:08 PM
deeps said...: Beautifully bloody...; November 24, 2013 at 3:22 PM

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