Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Tears of blood







Heart numb with sorrow;
A joy drop couldn't dilute
pain in tears of blood


Written for Haiku Heights



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zunnur said...

I can feel the pain

Tarang Sinha said...

"A joy drop couldn't dilute the pain..." I liked this!
Be happy...always!:)

propelsteps said...

Appreciating and accepting pain as a part of life is true wisdom. Your words are so beautiful. Keep writing.

shubham said...

lovely, and your music adds up...

Nikhil said...

A sweet melancholous haiku indeed!:)
Well put!:)

Ankur Anand said...

nice n dark :)

Jyotsna Bhatia said...

Nice Haiku

Jyoti Mishra said...

pain can do that to a person

a Rat said...

painful...! good one.

Veena said...

Pain the part of life if beautiful !!!!!
The music certainly adds up ..Be happy
Good Day Valli

bagofbrains said...

Brilliant Valli... you are so good :) I could feel the pain.
take care and keep smiling

indu chhibber said...

INTENSE FEELINGS IN MINIMUM WORDS-JUST GREAT!

Paresh Kale said...

Good one !

sathish kumar said...

aha! touched.

Sumana Roy said...

strongly moving.........

Designed by Vera said...

Beautiful...love the music!

Rahul Bhatia said...

Moving, Valli!

Usha Menon said...

What an insightful Haiku.

Reading Pleasure said...

Beautifully Profound

Reshma said...

When the heart is hurt, the pain is indeed unbearable...

Enigmatic Soul said...

Wow. Beautiful.

Shaila Parikh said...

Loved it... Awesome words.. Numbness is not silence.. its a chaos due to the turbulence of thoughts... actually

Words N Me said...

Loved it... Awesome words.. Numbness is not silence.. its a chaos due to the turbulence of thoughts... actually

deeps said...

Beautifully bloody...

 

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