Saturday, June 02, 2012

For eternity!

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Open my heart's lock
with your love key and stay there
for eternity!

Written for Haiku Heights

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Leo said...

Very beautiful thought :) I liked it.

Possibly the ending could have been

...stay there
for eternity

A little more beauty perhaps. Thanks! :)

Vållῐ ★☆ said...

Thanks for the suggestion Leo :) Will change it :)

MAHARUKH said...

sooooooo romantic and simple :) reflects my mood today <3<3<3

Jaideep said...

Love is in the air, right Valli !

Tigerbrite said...

Very lovely and romantic.

Jaskirancanvas said...

truly romantic.....

Pranita said...

Sweet and direct :)
Flavors of experience!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read everyone :)


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