Thursday, May 31, 2012

Betrayal





Sketch on betrayal

We were a happy couple
Living in peace at our castle
Striking each other with love arrows
And sharing each others joys and sorrows...

Then, came this bewitching damsel...
she took him away from me, casting her wicked, charming spell
He stopped loving me, like he did before
Nothing was the same anymore!

We had an argument and fight
Every day and every night
He took every chance to break my heart
He chose her over me and threw me apart…

I decorated myself like her, to please him
Sadly, that did not impress him!
Poor me! I can paint my face, how can I paint my heart?
Longing for everything to go back to start!

I spent sleepless nights,
Thinking about him and her
Heart filled with terrible frights
scaring me "He is gone, forever!"

Stuck up in the jaws of his betrayal
neither swallowed, nor relieved
Isn't this life very cruel??
A sad story my fate has weaved!



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Purple Mist said...

Very intense!

Blahblaholic ♥ © said...

This is intense. So beautiful!
Also, love the new background :)

Fatima said...

Nice nice....weaved it beautifully :)

Take Care

Tarang Sinha said...

Your sketch reminds me of pictures used for short stories in Hindi women magazines. Nice poem and sketch!:)

Locomente said...

Really touchy...
So brief...
Yet engrossing...
the sketch is good too...
And hey!!!
I am loving the shooting star animation..
So sorry abt being so irregular!!!
U rock!!!

Pinky said...

beautifully expressed the feelings ! awesome art

D said...

awesome and strong one !
-Dee

Punam said...

Well, meeting the imperfect is how you tend to learn what perfect should be. So you know for next time.

✿Sie✿ said...

you have written it so beautifully Valli..it is sad but so true..it happens in reality and I did experienced it..I'm glad I made the right decision and had my freedom because betrayal of trust is the most damaging situation in a relationship!

AmitAag said...

...nice poem and drawing, Valli:)

Rajesh Dharmarajan said...

Sad one! But, I liked the powerful words :)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Amazing story of betrayal through a poetry:) Great Valli!

Manish Moothedath said...

Lovely...

- N - said...

Wonderfully written!

NuPuR ChAuBe said...

Hello, a touching poem..and a gr8 blog too!!

Neha said...

Heart-breaks and betrayal are heart-wrenching feelings. Beautiful poetry and sketch :)

jaish_vats said...

Good One!

гαvι said...

painful :-( :-X

SprigBlossoms said...

Losing love is a hard feeling, indeed. Lovely poem!

Tigerbrite said...

How sad. Nicely penned.

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read everyone :)

indu chhibber said...

A very sad situation indeed--well said .

 

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