Monday, April 02, 2012

First rain drops

(Image taken from here)

Dry, parched and deserted
land eagerly waits to absorb
the first rain drops!

Written for Haiku Heights

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kalyan said...

It may be for haiku ... but sure the clouds will listen n shower to raise up the green again...

♥●• İzdihër •●♥ said...


Kinara :) said...

I got that wonderful feeling of first rain drops!

P.S: What format did u use? I was just confused bcoz the first line had 6 syllables instead of 5..! I am not sure, just sharing my views!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Kalyan..Thanks for the read :)

Izdiher...Thanks for the read :)

Kinara...Thanks for the read :)

I don't know...I too got that doubt...When I checked It showed that 'parched' has single not sure about it!

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zongrik said...

if i lived there, i'd be waiting for the first rainfall too

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Sometimes I feel as parched and deserted as that land!

Deserted Branches

Chevrefeuille said...

Really ... Valli this one is beautiful.

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read Samantha,zongrik and Chev :)


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