Thursday, October 13, 2011

I am lost





lost in thoughts

I am lost...
Lost like the dissolved raindrop
searching for its identity in the mighty ocean

I am lost....
Lost like the fallen dead lonely leaf
helplessly carried away by the force of wind

I am lost.....
Lost like the red petal in the white rose
looking for a friend, though surrounded by foes

I am lost....
Lost like the holes engulfed in voids of pain
waiting to get filled with joy drops of rain

I am lost....
Lost like the isolated oil drop
floating on the water standing apart

I am lost....
Within myself
Seeking for the mirror of my true reflection

P.s: Last stanza contributed by my friend Simran



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Arpitha Holla said...

nice.. :) :) kinda explains my situation now.. "lost".. :)

vaisakhi said...

hmm guess we all are lost at times....but we have our own signifnc even then....loved these lines like nethin...I am lost....
Lost like the holes engulfed in voids of pain
waiting to get filled with joy drops of rain....beautiful....:)

Simran said...

Wonderful and touching..
As always relating with me!
Thanks for adding my lines .. :)

Leo said...

Wonderful.. and it does ring true sometimes too :) But perhaps, the raindrop in the ocean isn't dissolved, but lost in a deep friendship, finding itself :)

Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

Being Pramoda... said...

Hai, more than the lines, the examples and the situations u explained attracted me..;)

Thanks for sharing the nice poem..;)

SR Sweeya Pisupati said...

lost my words to post a comment..
lost myself in your post..

SR Sweeya Pisupati said...

i loved it.. very touching one with wonderful and very apt examples

adreamygal said...

The usage of 'lost' at end of first line and beginning of second, lingers deep.. Indeed, while losing, we want to find ourself, so that we get lose at right place, in right hands :) Its a good poem, with words straight from heart :)

Louise Hernan said...

You sure came up with some great examples of what "lost is like". (I forgot what the word is for examples like that.) Anyway great writing there Valli - and Simran, your line about the mirror is a perfect ending. :)

Sagittarian said...

It's a wonderful piece.. Touching and feel your heart on it.. But don't give-up, keep on moving friend, hope is always around us..:)

Great post!:) Have a wonderful day!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Arpitha..Hope you will find yourself soon :)
Thanks for the read :)

Vaisakhi...Thanks for the read :)

Simy...Thanks and you are welcome ;)

Leo...Yes, You are true in other perspective..Thanks for the read :)

Being Pramoda...Thanks for the read :)

Sweeya...Thanks for the read

Adreamygal...Thanks for the read :)

Louise..Thanks for the read :)

Saggitarian..Thanks for the read :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

We are all lost at a point, and finding the way out is indeed difficult..

But we must not give up :)
Nice post!

Lady*♥*Fiona said...

I love your blog! Your poetry is so beautiful ~ I really love this one and can relate to it :)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read Philo, Lady*♥*Fiona

Vijay Menon said...

I'm lost too and I think each one of us is.
Good one :)

Cheers!
http://vj-menon.blogspot.com

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Vijay :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Thank you for your comment :)

Do come by again :D

MangoMan said...

Damn, that's picturesque. :)

kiran said...

hmmmm..nice :))

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read MangoMan, Kiran

Enchantress said...

amazing :) may you find the way on some beautiful street of love

 

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