Friday, July 08, 2011

Delusion






(Photo by Phatpuppyart)

My sweet friend Simran, introduced me one cool way of writing poems....When she explained, I thought that was difficult for me because of the condtion that needs to be followed....But I had given a try!.....just for her :)....And Wow!!...I've done it coz of her encouragement....She introduced this new talent hidden in me...Thanks to her :) 
Hope you will enjoy reading our poem :) ♥


Sacred salve from sanctify ,
Insomnia ingression ,
Maverick thoughts in manana ,
Rinse my sin ,
Amplify my amour against anesthetize,
Nirvana nimble not nihilism.

Vultures like circling thoughts
Always haunt me day and night
Let me Sleep, Oh thoughts!!
Leave me alone, Let my mind rest,
In peace and in Solace.


P.S. - In each line first alphabet is making my name's spelling in my lines and Simran's name spelling in her lines :)..we managed it somehow and that's how we differentiated from others...:)



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winds of time said...

ento emo em ardam kale
but variety

Simran said...

Nice intro. :)..Thank you so much for such wonderful words.It's your talent and creativity that you made it just in few mins! I was surprised to see your instant and remarkable job! :)

I'm so happy and honored that you wrote for me and see in just a one try you made it so perfect! So always go ahead in trying new things :)..It's nice to work with you. Lot's of love and wishes to you..Keep smiling!

Srisheel said...

thanks a lot simran :)

Valli said...

@Winds of time...Hmmm

@Simran....:) :) :) All smiles :)

@Srisheel...:)

Maria said...

Wow! Valli's 1 is awesome.
@Simran....did u go and put the entire dictionary in your poem? Whoa...that is some vocab! I'll have to do a lot of googling.

Nice style...I'll try it sometime. :)

PRANEETH said...

lol....Good one valli...poetry with your name abbrevating...nice thought..

Appreciated

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks Maria, Praneeth :)

εﺓз♪♥In a Girl's Heart♥♪εﺓз said...

masth undi akka \,,/ loved it

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks Keyrthana :)

Rachael Stanley said...

Beautiful music. Beautiful poem. I love the way each line begins with a letter from your name. Very clever. Rachael, Dublin Ireland

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read Rachael :)

BARBARA said...

A great combo of words and music, Valli...

 

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