Monday, May 02, 2011

Unstable :(





unstable
Photo by Puvi Joshi (Mint Icetea Photography)

 
I hate those feelings which make me unstableThey neither let me reach the stars nor let me feel the earth Drops me on the thin border line separating the two worlds :(



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Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi

the end was drafted beautifully gal... :)
nice..

Regards,
The Silhouette...

Poetic Artist said...

It is in that time between where we learn to fly or crawl.

Naaz said...

This feeling is mutual...keep going, gud ;)

vaisakhi said...

guess this is the case wid most of us...:)...nicely drafted...:)

... Madhumathi ... said...

This is a feeling vch v often feel.. :) Beautifully portrayed by you in such a rhythmic way :)

XOXO
~Madhumathi

Deepika said...

what should i comment on?
write up or feel?
feeling made me feel heavy.. inability of something.. like chains pulling back... is harsh
and write up.. u know its awesome valli :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Hanging in the middle and nothing going the way you want them to??
It happens :) But it passes. Hold a smile, fight back and fly high. You will reach the sky :)

Valli said...

@Eon
Thanks :)

@Poetic Artist
Yeah! May be!..Thanks for the read :)

@Naaz
Hmmm..Thanks :)

@Vaisakhi
Thanks for the read :)

@Madhu
Thanks dear :)

@Deepika
Thanks dear :)

@Philo
Thanks for your suggestion dear..:)

Fatima said...

I know what it's like, but as I said its a wonderful work by you :)

Take Care.

Valli said...

ThanQ Fatima ;)

Ellecee said...

Valli, I like this a lot. I've had those feelings, especially in my youth. Well done.

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

true, beautifully portrayed, keep writing!

sathish kumar said...

intense Valli

Hyperbolic Hues said...

amazing pictures, layout, and background music.
The falling starts looks very sweet,the way you have expressed your feelings, is simply beautiful!!

Rupertt Wind said...

Its beautiful, I too hate the feeling of being in between, neither their nor thither. A feeliong of being lost and helpless but I time I dont we cant help it.

BTW You have a nice playlist. care to share?

 

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