Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Lonely classroom





lonely classroom
Photo by Puvi Joshi (Mint Icetea Photography)

I used to sit in the classroom
For me, It was full of gloom
I was always treated apart
Like a thrown away piece of broken art
I used to sit alone in the corner of the bench
In the shower of loneliness I used to drench
Along with me no one used to walk
No one used to talk
No one used to listen
No one used to pay attention
With cutting words I was always teased
Seeing me in painful condition they were very happy & pleased
I used to cry internally
With pain, very bitterly
I used to ask myself....
Am I so bad?...
Am I really mad?...
Seeing me like this, Will it make them glad?
But Why?.....
To kill my boredom,
I used to draw, I used to play with my pen
I used to count the numbers, From 0 to 10
I used to recite songs in my mind
I was alive in thoughts but my presence was unknown & blind
I found life in those lifeless things
As they gave me solace than these people with hard feelings
Ah!...I got used to that killing pain
It was my best friend...Our friendship shall always remain



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☺♥♪Feelings Heart Felt♪♥☺ said...

nice1 akka...

Valli said...

ThanQ Keerthana

TD* said...

NICE ONE valli

Valli said...

ThanQ..:)

Dimpu said...

naakaithe epdila anipiyyale :P btw gud one darlz :)

Valli said...

Dimpu
Oh....ala anipinchakapodam manchide darlz...

ThanQ..:)

Abhishek said...

akka..i saw myself all through the length of it..

Valli said...

Hmm...:'(
Even I faced all those things Abhishek....

Locomente said...

Indeed...
Loneliness can be the best friend...
It helps you fall in love with yourself...
The best and the selfless love!!!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Locomente

kalyan said...

tats why i changed the verses as " they are becoming alone by leaving me... " i am the first bench student just listening to lecture...reading..writing...playing with myself..but i never felt the pain becoz teachers became my friends... :) - anyway its a kinda experience otherwise today it wont became a beautiful post before us...

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Kalyan :)

deepak kripal said...

what a beautiful poem.. lovely..

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

beautiful! sometimes solitude make us realize our self worth, very well written!

Jay Singh said...

Hi valli,

Oh my, you have portrayed the true picture of a student who feels lonely even in a classroom full of students.
Nice work once again.

Regards

Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

Debopam said...

Such a nice poem.....

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Mohit Udhwani said...

Nice poem

Nice theme as well

Thumps up

Sankara Jayanth said...

hurtingly beautiful. i can completely feel the emotion.

TTT said...

nice one ...

gayatri soni said...

Oh! You are a superb creature dear. Let them apart, you are truly a craft. I loved the poem- it oozes every emotion you had had during school days. Keep smiling!

Renju said...

Really felt it so close to heart. .dont know what to say. .beautifully written dear. .

Vineet Digga said...

even i was a bit of outcast during my school days. but i guess it was for the best. :)
good one!

maliny said...

could relate to the poem as i too was one of those silent ones . . nicely written :)

sathish kumar said...

so wonderful... so rhythmic...

KayEm said...

Very nice, Valli. We've all felt alone in a crowd at some time or another.

Panchali said...

Yea, it’s heart-wrenching and I know just how exactly it felt.
Bullying is ugly.. it is painful.. it seems unfair and unjustified !Schools need to address bullying with a no-tolerance policy, and provide help for students who get victimized...beautiful piece, brought a lump to my throat. Think positive...loneliness made you an incredible poet!!:) So, forgive those monsters!!

 

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