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Dear Society,
I may be born
out of a mistake
of love or lust
But, how does that
make me a mistake?
My creation
a mistake?
My existence
a mistake?
Can a lotus flower
be labelled as 'impure'
just because it came out
of dirty pond?
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nice one
..Valli..my dear friend..you are the best..
..the wizardess of words..love this wonderful piece.. :)
Loved the last 2 lines :)
Lovely comparison Valli...
Loved it....a child can never be impure...
SuperB 1 ra.. :)
nice comparison ~
Wonderfully weaved the innocence of a girl child.
This is so touchy
Especially the last line...
Wonderful!!!
oh! so beautifully touching that i can sense both pleasure and pain in what you have just composed. Life when it happens is creation and creation just is so eternal. Alas! if everyone could understand that then no creation would ever be impure.
Loved this as much as i have loved all that ever comes out of ur beautiful heart. :)
Touching lines right from a heart which understands the pain of the fairer sex ... beautiful :)
Ahh, so true. Poignant words
Superb thats what it is Valli
I think nothing is more beautiful and true than this specially the last lines " can a lotus flower..."
A moving piece, Valli. So well portrayed...
last 2 lines are great (y)
Such beautiful lines, Valli. :)
Lovely thoughts Valli!
hey valli... i so agree.. just because a lotus came from a dirty pond, it cannot be labeled as "impure"
words straight from the heart. Good one dear!
So pure and lovely..:-)
You said it Valli-so sensitively in a nutshell.
lovely..innocent ..touching :-)
Nice post! :)
awesome lines! its really fantastic with the words as well as the feel!
Exquisite image and words!
true indeed!
you have always amused me valli.
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touching!
Point well mentioned It's not the mistake of the child who was born due to lust and was left alone in this world, but of those who did not have the heart to give him/her right.
Beauty! : )