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A noiseless, anguish cry
underneath her blanket
She makes sure nobody is watching her
as she silently screams inside
A part of her heart
melts as tears in her eyes
Carrying the residue
of pain and broken dreams
Bitterly sobbing, she thinks ....even if I unveil my tears,
who would care?
To console my heart, calm my fears,
who would be there?
Some people show hatred
calling her the drama queen..
Some people show her sympathy
when all she needs is love
Only she knows,
the pain she goes through
She is the only one who’s there for herself,
she sobs and knows it is true…..
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This echoes the anguish of many a solitary souls.
You've so magically woven your words by the thread of palpable despair felt by all of us at some point in time of our lives.
"Some people show her sympathy when all she needs is love"
Touched !!!
A very sensitive peace ... we all need love, but how many actually get the real essence of it?
Pain is somthing which is very personal at times. We end up sharing joy and happiness but its difficult with pain. Nicely written
that was a touching one -full of emotions - damn awesomely written
I loved it when you wrote about sobbing and veiling of tears. We do it when we are in pain and inconsolable.
I felt as if U have written this for me..
So touchy
Read this when I was in exactly the same state. Can relate to it so much !!
Moving lines which really evoke the feelings of anguish.
Well crafted piece of writing, filled with loads of emotion...:)
Truly touched!
Feelings of many a women.. and men too..
way you've written it, makes it all the more beautiful and it lingers on.. :)
Excellent-you express your thoughts so beautifully,the 2nd para esp. was brilliant.
So touchy..wrenched my heart..
we all could relate to this at some point. beautifully written... 2 thumbs up
Very emotional poem ...does permeate the anguish and loneliness of the person ! Great one Valli
ah, touching! heal...heal, my dear.
Now what should I say...I can't tell you how excited I am, reading this piece. I can emphasize with it:D
your work is just too deep! the pain,the shattered heart! the lonliness..you have put up this too well!! people hardly understand emotions dese days n name it as drama !! it's just so true! ur poem was very touching n i admire u loads :)
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Sympathy is not what one wants. Unfortunately, not everybody can really understand or have the time and ability to undertand the situation. Nicely written.
Very nice Valli:)
Lovely words. Beautiful. I like all your wordings which are carved like a statue on the stone. With regards.
beautiful!!
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lovely poignant words...nicely crafted lines!
A very sensitive writing full of anguish and pain! Lovely writing Valli:)
unheard millions cry may be heard by these lines, a nice one.
Thanks for the read Everyone :)
You are very sensitive towards the emotions like me :)
This is Super Wonder post!
Close to my heart...
Sometimes nobody understands...
So very true that sometimes we need love and not sympathy...
Care and not advice...