tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post3997032070502301817..comments2023-10-18T21:10:03.239+05:30Comments on Poetry - Reflection of my feelings ♥ ツ: Feelings Of An Orphan :'(Sri Vallihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-90674134458087913722016-11-26T06:39:36.050+05:302016-11-26T06:39:36.050+05:30it's so goodit's so good <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14625980603879815356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-78273342209170488212013-05-30T09:55:02.660+05:302013-05-30T09:55:02.660+05:30So touched So touched Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-2996020594332022772013-04-09T17:55:12.079+05:302013-04-09T17:55:12.079+05:30awesome rhyme scheme...but some lines r like sente...awesome rhyme scheme...but some lines r like sentences...remember : there is a mild tolerance for grammatical errors in case of writing poems... u could use it as an advantage to shorten long lines....(I am not a critic.... just telling what i thought... and never have i written poems as much as u did...)Vishnu Kelothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628629794042996358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-75256570805698964312013-03-16T22:43:17.996+05:302013-03-16T22:43:17.996+05:30Oh! you plucked a chord from my heart... Oh! you plucked a chord from my heart... sathishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00516674622913614208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-63494819586004170962013-03-16T19:28:33.122+05:302013-03-16T19:28:33.122+05:30:(
Great work!:(<br /><br />Great work!Gayatri Sonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01717397979997870319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-21913313546217747202013-03-13T16:01:34.091+05:302013-03-13T16:01:34.091+05:30excellent poem,beautifully writtenexcellent poem,beautifully writtenCifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-64753196230206776782013-03-13T15:15:52.048+05:302013-03-13T15:15:52.048+05:30sooo touching!!
Clicks By Eyeblinkssooo touching!! <br /><br /><a href="http://clicksbyeyeblinks.blogspot.in" rel="nofollow">Clicks By Eyeblinks</a><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00577697840701860269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-34603263690872777062013-03-12T17:37:34.682+05:302013-03-12T17:37:34.682+05:30Lovely expression !Lovely expression !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-75616351332148759352013-03-12T16:53:27.718+05:302013-03-12T16:53:27.718+05:30Oh...wat a sad but lovely poemOh...wat a sad but lovely poemNandini Dekahttp://nandinispeaks.blogspot.innoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-41645276049526765792013-03-12T16:04:05.335+05:302013-03-12T16:04:05.335+05:30oh Valli ...your poem brought tears to my eyes ......oh Valli ...your poem brought tears to my eyes ... TTThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10165759530468274168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-43678554266382621242013-03-12T13:12:48.863+05:302013-03-12T13:12:48.863+05:30You are so awesome at poetry Valli!! You really ma...You are so awesome at poetry Valli!! You really made me cry today....Very touching and true, i'll never underestimate an orphan kid from now onward...I can't get them their parents back but i'll do my best to support them in their life!!! Thank u for sharing this absolutely touching and paining poetry dear_I am inspired! Here's a salute for u ^_^> Bushrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16167160087114353868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-77167741736594295952013-03-12T10:09:21.272+05:302013-03-12T10:09:21.272+05:30Oh my goodness, that just breaks my heart, Valli. ...Oh my goodness, that just breaks my heart, Valli. A beautiful piece....as always!:)Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-15623775889726516132013-03-12T08:51:42.353+05:302013-03-12T08:51:42.353+05:30Your lines touch the heart,they are very empatheti...Your lines touch the heart,they are very empathetic...we can never guess what goes on in an orphan's heart.indu chhibberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17755152757229783585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-16046148931800607492013-03-11T23:42:27.273+05:302013-03-11T23:42:27.273+05:30Heart touching...
Very well written.!Heart touching...<br /><br />Very well written.!Kcalpeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12966012229273212122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-10178623348376393382013-03-11T22:58:47.217+05:302013-03-11T22:58:47.217+05:30Good one Valli....Good one Valli....Gokulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02616169794809744877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-23924326004962763202013-03-11T21:29:15.618+05:302013-03-11T21:29:15.618+05:30i jus have no words soo emotional touching u r sim...i jus have no words soo emotional touching u r simply awsome ✿◕‿◕✿miss mermaid ✾◕‿◕✾https://www.blogger.com/profile/11146395554893980440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-73208535582757206142013-03-11T20:47:21.062+05:302013-03-11T20:47:21.062+05:30It pierced my heart, Valli! No body, and absolutel...It pierced my heart, Valli! No body, and absolutely nothing can replace parents in one's life. Oh God! nobody deserves this.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-16555605893891600192013-03-11T20:11:53.556+05:302013-03-11T20:11:53.556+05:30Brilliant as usualBrilliant as usualHimadri Singhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07410456314633259785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-72805342536470143232013-03-11T17:44:18.489+05:302013-03-11T17:44:18.489+05:30I like this one......it painted the whole pic in m...I like this one......it painted the whole pic in my mind in the end all i wanna do is showing them love...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17877498626014019089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-21521072098787616172013-03-11T17:04:15.444+05:302013-03-11T17:04:15.444+05:30Tears in my eyes Valli. Beautiful Work.Loved it.Ke...Tears in my eyes Valli. Beautiful Work.Loved it.Keep going.<br />I feel a lot for these innocent ones. <br /><br /><a href="http://www.aboutomkaar.com/" rel="nofollow">Travel India</a>Vishal Rathodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15364692809486387555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-35193388939171974802013-03-11T14:50:28.091+05:302013-03-11T14:50:28.091+05:30Poignanat!Poignanat!Rahul Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690287853990880735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-3224892448185227892013-03-11T12:32:11.497+05:302013-03-11T12:32:11.497+05:30Very touching indeed. Really sad.Very touching indeed. Really sad.Meowwhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00658215883397017763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-283181837302593832013-01-20T12:13:46.498+05:302013-01-20T12:13:46.498+05:30one day they will smile :)one day they will smile :)Kalyanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00628835953003970511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-65907345222703253892012-03-02T09:32:43.454+05:302012-03-02T09:32:43.454+05:30Beautifully used words to describe the life from a...Beautifully used words to describe the life from an orphans eyes.Brilliant.Its my first time here and i think i am going to keep coming back!I had written something on similar lines.http://myblawghh.blogspot.in/2011/12/my-christmas.html <br /><br />Cheers,<br /><a href="http://myblawghh.blogspot.in" rel="nofollow">My world, my thoughts, my musings...</a>Upasanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06990593159373827354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-58266995495126919012011-08-30T17:24:20.642+05:302011-08-30T17:24:20.642+05:30Thanks for sharing your opinion :)Thanks for sharing your opinion :)Sri Vallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.com