tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post1835200649341419395..comments2023-10-18T21:10:03.239+05:30Comments on Poetry - Reflection of my feelings ♥ ツ: Budding poetrySri Vallihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-77107227786731555672012-12-20T08:14:14.615+05:302012-12-20T08:14:14.615+05:30We all are always learning, Valli. Only God is per...We all are always learning, Valli. Only God is perfect.<br />Your first poems show innocence and I enjoyed them a lot, believe me, it was worth taking the risk!<br />Thoughts are never stupid or rubbish. <br />I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.<br />Thanks for sharing your poetry and go on writing.<br />A hug,<br /><i>Dulcina</i>Dulcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804606583762933316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-44778499338518386942012-12-19T10:59:46.895+05:302012-12-19T10:59:46.895+05:30Really indeed post, and you have a Beautiful outlo...Really indeed post, and you have a Beautiful outlook of your blog... <br />And thanks for supporting my post on indiblogger :)<br /><br />Noopur<br />http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/Noopurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09659666226774376374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-54740155598933720972012-12-19T10:30:30.826+05:302012-12-19T10:30:30.826+05:30To begin with... Lovely image... the words in poem...To begin with... Lovely image... the words in poem depicts the thoughts of a budding poet... Friends reaction - I cant totally undestand.<br /><br />What i loved is ur initial days poem... Especially the story of Edd and that story in deep red sea... They are marvelous... <br /><br />And hey! u rhyme very nice. I remember that when i was young, I just could not write anything! I used to fail shamelessly. At least u ver successful!!!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-591647542757190672012-12-18T15:45:47.838+05:302012-12-18T15:45:47.838+05:30very true friendship is very noble and I beleive i...very true friendship is very noble and I beleive in it with all my heart .. <br /><br />I wish i am able to write a poem someday , I have tried but never managed to .. you are GOOOD ... keep it up and all the best <br /><br /><a href="http://mannbikram.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Bikram's</a>Bikramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17320753339263375295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-30828519620084049862012-12-18T13:53:57.551+05:302012-12-18T13:53:57.551+05:30Amazing wordsAmazing wordsShilpi Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515133395806046420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-57743981338218230522012-12-18T05:17:44.011+05:302012-12-18T05:17:44.011+05:30I have nominated you for the blogger of the year a...I have nominated you for the blogger of the year award. If you do not accept Awards I understand, just know you are appreciated by http://heavenhappens.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-46151910608676120002012-12-17T18:40:12.607+05:302012-12-17T18:40:12.607+05:30Your initial works are beautiful and candid.
I mu...Your initial works are beautiful and candid.<br /><br />I must tell you it takes much self awareness and poise to acknowledge that your past was up to the mark ( though yours are Shakespearean compared to my best poem), You have the making of a great now all you have to do is go the distance.<br /><br />And I can tell that its my friend who is now the great poet you see....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12951760263589311472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-6047246885607615472012-12-17T18:30:17.396+05:302012-12-17T18:30:17.396+05:30i see you got a wonderful blog here...keep it up
t...i see you got a wonderful blog here...keep it up<br />to be honest havent read the long poem you posted above..read only the 1st part..<br />I dropped by to thank for the votes at indiblogger...I see the bottom disclaimer of yours is similar to mine..coincidence I should say..keep posting.Unknown!!!https://www.blogger.com/profile/18175262167978043233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-69242190318312699642012-12-17T18:20:34.169+05:302012-12-17T18:20:34.169+05:30Hi valli,
That was so cute and innocent. I especi...Hi valli,<br /><br />That was so cute and innocent. I especially liked edd. :D <br />Every line ending in a rhyme. Thanks for sharing your initial work :)<br /><br />Regards<br /><br />Jay<br />http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/provoqdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00629557333176692247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-41104267144594023352012-12-17T16:27:20.097+05:302012-12-17T16:27:20.097+05:30When you have a passion for something, you have no...When you have a passion for something, you have no choice except to start from somewhere. Writing is certainly a learning experience and it becomes meaningful with the inspiration and motivation from blogging buddies. I too feel silly when I read my past works and my older blog posts.<br /><br />Your old poems are so cute indeed. I like the way each of them rhymes, especially Friendship, it is short yet so sweet.<br />Zunnurhttp://a-little-time.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-2290451035070491612012-12-17T14:45:21.377+05:302012-12-17T14:45:21.377+05:30:) Mind blowing Valli.... :)
loved story of Edd :)...:) Mind blowing Valli.... :)<br />loved story of Edd :))sathishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00516674622913614208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-51157204198621909392012-12-17T12:51:37.495+05:302012-12-17T12:51:37.495+05:30What? Oh baby, those poems are good! As a child, i...What? Oh baby, those poems are good! As a child, if words and stories can matter that much - the amount of feelings you've tried to express with your limited sentence making knowledge! - it is even more beautiful instead of stupid! Some are funny, yes I agree, but it's still brilliant! If you look at my initial poems, you'd die of boredom! I die of boredom reading them! Seriously :P <br /><br />I LOVEEEE the "long ago in red sea" poem - how it all makes sense in the last line - everything just Boom! Right where it belongs! Cruel world..<br /><br />I also love your Story of Edd because I also felt like that when I was admitted to a hospital :P I could understand how his face turned Z! ;)<br /><br />And for the Story Written as Poem!-well what can I say. A small Poetry with a meaning is worth a thousand words!GoddessChhavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13154853993554108461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-42322037357841786412012-12-17T12:31:42.617+05:302012-12-17T12:31:42.617+05:30Absolutely Brilliant, Valli:) Addorable poems thou...Absolutely Brilliant, Valli:) Addorable poems though you claim they were just the begining!! Do get them published!! Rahul Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690287853990880735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-40887832964642643632012-12-17T10:21:37.179+05:302012-12-17T10:21:37.179+05:30awwwwww ...those were such cute poems -and u noe w...awwwwww ...those were such cute poems -and u noe what i am a big fan of ur poems ,i love them to the core -even these initial poems made me smile :) :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-72730018270920042702012-12-16T21:50:52.987+05:302012-12-16T21:50:52.987+05:30@Saru
Thanks for the read Saru :) ^_^ Feels great ...@Saru<br />Thanks for the read Saru :) ^_^ Feels great to hear 'winner from the start!' :)<br /><br />@Meenakshi <br />Thanks for the read. I totally agree! :) "why we mature to term these gems stupidities?" Ah! that's so true! Thank God!, there is still a child in me which treasures sweet innocent things like these poems :) But, sadly sometimes, matured part dominates and calls them stupid :/ Sri Vallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-55447110727809282622012-12-16T20:48:07.860+05:302012-12-16T20:48:07.860+05:30Valli, You got me here! but can a poet escape thos...Valli, You got me here! but can a poet escape those learning years and all the stupidities that come with that. I feel stupid even now sometimes. And those initial poems those are so cute, imagination at its best. Oh! why we mature to term these gems stupidities, why we grow up. Why we just don't freeze in those times, when everything is was possible, even living on an octopus! You are blessed, Valli!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1204970776505521240.post-60572521547550153902012-12-16T20:16:12.664+05:302012-12-16T20:16:12.664+05:30Looks like you are a winner from the start. Beauti...Looks like you are a winner from the start. Beautiful, honest and innocent work. :)Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.com