Monday, October 13, 2014

Missing pages of a diary






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It was raining. She was preparing samosas in the kitchen. Her husband was watching cricket sipping a cup of tea. Her son ran hurriedly and took out her diary from the old rack and tore some pages. Some of her life secrets and memories are now floating away as paperboats. Wish those were bitter pages.



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a Rat said...

something to hope for.. nice one Valli :)

Red Handed said...

WOW....That was short and crisp!

Bhavani Nandan said...

Yes..... Wish those we're bitter pages!!!

ANJALI.N.KUMAR said...

that was beautiful!

Locomente said...

Very few words. But conveys so much. About how life changes... yet keeps going on... how time heals wounds... and how children teaches us to forgive and forget...

Remarkable one!

Vandana Sharma said...

i too wish the same

Datta Ghosh said...

I just loved what you wrote....it just has so much to say in so little words.

Anita said...

How touching!
Diaries with secrets need to be kept locked :)

Madhusudan Mahawar said...

very nice!

Ravish Mani said...

It reminds me of my childhood :)

AuraOfThoughts MeenalSonal said...

Diares are treasure n few pages missing ia like heart sinking

AmitAag said...

Thoughtful!

Maniparna Sengupta Majumder said...

Few words but they convey much...beautifully done... :-)

Indrani said...

Good one , well told in few lines. :)

Rahul Bhatia said...

As good as your petry, Valli:)

Chutzpah said...

Sometimes others feelings touch you very closely. Same happened to me after reading this.
Nice...

Anil Sahu said...

Very nice write up within a little words. :) Anil Sahu

Bikramjit Singh Mann said...

Oh no..

I would not like pages torn off my diary even if they were bitter pages :(

but short and crisp story ..

Bikram's

Monica Sharma said...

wonderful expression......................

 

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