Sunday, April 13, 2014

Loving me is like....





illusion love
(Image taken from here)

Loving me is like chasing a mirage...
You run towards me when
my colors attract you
But Alas!
This rainbow slowly dissolves
as you get closer
You stand still, looking at me
surprised and disappointed
I'm not the way you've seen,
or the way you've imagined me to be......
And soon your love begins to melt
draining away slowly
accompanying my fading colors...



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Ankur Anand said...

such a nice piece .. every coin has two side :)

Jyotsna Bhatia said...

Just wow.. I could relate.. so much..

Ranita Sinha said...

A wonderful piece Valli..

Anita said...

Really lovely. This is so true, Valii.

Sangeeta Reghu said...

Valli - beautiful !! But true love will never fade away ... People change, situations change but true will remain forever ...

Umamaheswari Anandane said...

Genuine and the fact most relationships are but again the reversal is where the true love begins....nice poetry!

Maniparna Sengupta Majumder said...

Nice lines..love which is formed by the attraction of external colours is sure to fade away...

Lancelot Quadras said...

Ahhhhh... your writing just got back some old memories.... Very true indeed..!!

Priya Angel said...

Lovely..!!

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice lines...

Locomente said...

I loved this little piece of poetry... Sounds like it is straight from the heart and that it is about me... Touchy and kudos to you, Valli, because you always manage to do it!

shivani said...

Love swells like the Solway,but ebbs like its tide- Even love at its first beginning or awakening is great as the coming of the tides with waves that grow in intensity,but as time goes on, the intensity slows and diminishes like the ebbing of the sea. Love is constant but it does have its strong moments and also its weaker ones but it is always there that is if love is really there. Fact of the matter is mostly physical attraction is misconstrued to be love...

lotus said...

when surfing net i came across ur blog ,nice post and lovely blog :)

cifar shayar said...

brilliant The Page Will Turn

pooja mahimkar said...

Rightly said! :) Btw, I really like your blog theme.. the stars are very cute

Amrit Sinha said...

It's heartbreaking when something like this happens :-(

rigzin said...

..love starts..love droops..love fades..then love starts again..that's the way it is..
..as always..loved the beauty on your poem..the way you juggle with words to create art..Valli..you are one among the best..keep writing.. :)

 

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