Monday, February 03, 2014

Lasting residues of broken friendship





memories
(Image taken from here)

After our friendship was broken
I folded the pages containing you
and hid them in the deep corner of my heart
wishing to glance at them never again
but the index of the memories
unexpectedly lead me there…
making me read you again
helplessly unfolding those
bitter pages of forgone memories
they bring out uncomfortable smiles and tears
that I couldn't avoid or deny in anyway
Some people can be kept aside in our hearts
but can never be forgotten
Some memories can be suppressed and hidden
but can never be burnt away
Wish my heart was also a graveyard
that burns out the meaningless existence
of unwanted people in my life
and the pages of their memories....Forever!!



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B said...

That is sad .. I wish and pray friendships never get over for any reason

Bikram

Veena said...

Nice Read...anyone can catch your eye but it takes someone special to catch your heart...But, false friends are like your shadow they follow you in the sun but leave u side when dark...!!

Rahul Bhatia said...

Very philosophical but true!

Split Strings said...

I can totally relate with this post of yours . No matter what none can replace few !

gaurab27 said...

It's like people will fall in love after visiting your blog...it's one of the most beautiful blog I've seen...I could understand how much effort has gone into all this but it's definitely worth it...the feel of blog is amazing with the background music and the sparkles coming out of cursor...one more thing love the contrast part where everything is so colorful and the pictures are in black white :) :D

Siny U K Nair said...

One of the very emotional ones :( Loved it!

a rat said...

well written poem.. good one Valli.

Panchali said...

Oh, this is so true! Beautiful....

Pratikshya Mishra said...

loved the poem valli... i love your blog, it's the most beautiful one i have ever visited...and the soothing music in the background is awesome....so much aesthetic appeal...

εїз Q Ŧ ¶ εїз said...

Yes...We can never Forget some people even after we know that they have left Us forever. Yet , some bring smiles and some Tears . The former are remembered in form of Sweet memories while the later ..as Hidden Pain. No matter what , We still Miss each of them! Friends are such wonderful that we want each of them Forever. :)

Ankur Anand said...

very nice !

Fizz Genuine said...

So Beautifully Penned down Sri... Marvelous... :) I wish my heart was a graveyard too...

locomente said...

Totally relatable and soulful... I loved the choice of your words and the melancholy it carries... As always... You touched my heart!

Indrani Singha said...

Very thoughtful....

Srilakshmi Medukonduru said...

Very nice.

SridharBukya said...


Some People remain in our hearts forever, even if seasons change, or an apocalypse may occur. We must thank them for bringing out the good in us while they were with us. This Particular Poem reminds me of my ex- GF, coincidentally having same name as you. Srivalli, who was a Twin. Thank you for this nice heart touching poem. You may visit my blog at http://kaavyaanjali.blogspot.in/

Aiswarya Moodadi said...

Nice one

Rajlakshmi said...

It's tough to forget people with whom you were close once. Well expressed.

Saru Singhal said...

One of the most creative pieces on broken love. The way you equated it with pages and index is simply beautiful.

Indrani said...

Something sad, true and well written.

Abrachan Pudussery said...

Very nice

Amrit Sinha said...

Memories can never be erased ... we just learn to live with them ... a beautifully expressed poem :-)

Akanksha Jain said...

Very beautifully you have expressed your thoughts via poem. Touchy, yet captivating :)

Neha Sharma said...

Lovely

A Homemaker's Utopia said...

Wow.Very beautiful poem Valli :-)

Deepak Bansal said...

Wish my heart was also a graveyard. So true!

Simran said...


Sprinkle of philosophy and emotions together in lines makes it powerful !

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful expression!!:)

sridevi gajula said...


Srivalli,really you are great....helplessly unfolding the pages........

Shruti Kashyap said...

words would be less to describe how beautiful your poem is !! just awesome..:)

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Rupertt Wind said...

A wonderful composition of the disillusioned in love. People are not what they always seem to be from a safe distance. Its difficult to find the ones who would love both the colors and the shades of grey, Thats one reason love is cherished and held above all for its not easy to find and a great many are left disillusioned at one point or the other.

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Ranita Sinha said...

Some people can be kept aside in our hearts but can never be burnt away........very true Valli, wonderfully said..

 

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