Tuesday, September 17, 2013

In the heart diary of illegitimate child





Orphan child
(Image taken from here)

Dear Society,
I may be born
out of a mistake
of love or lust
But, how does that
make me a mistake?
My creation
a mistake?
My existence
a mistake?
Can a lotus flower
be labelled as 'impure'
just because it came out
of dirty pond?


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cifar shayar said...

nice one

rigzin said...

..Valli..my dear friend..you are the best..
..the wizardess of words..love this wonderful piece.. :)

Siny U K Nair said...

Loved the last 2 lines :)

bushra M said...

Lovely comparison Valli...

Sadia Khan said...

Loved it....a child can never be impure...

anup.cute said...

SuperB 1 ra.. :)

Ankur Anand said...

nice comparison ~

Uma Anandane said...

Wonderfully weaved the innocence of a girl child.

Satya said...

This is so touchy
Especially the last line...
Wonderful!!!

shivani said...

oh! so beautifully touching that i can sense both pleasure and pain in what you have just composed. Life when it happens is creation and creation just is so eternal. Alas! if everyone could understand that then no creation would ever be impure.
Loved this as much as i have loved all that ever comes out of ur beautiful heart. :)

Najm Nisa said...

Touching lines right from a heart which understands the pain of the fairer sex ... beautiful :)

Anupam Patra said...

Ahh, so true. Poignant words

Vijay Prabhu said...

Superb thats what it is Valli

Pradip Biswas said...

I think nothing is more beautiful and true than this specially the last lines " can a lotus flower..."

Panchali said...

A moving piece, Valli. So well portrayed...

BiYaGo said...

last 2 lines are great (y)

D.Nambiar said...

Such beautiful lines, Valli. :)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Lovely thoughts Valli!

cezan koby said...

hey valli... i so agree.. just because a lotus came from a dirty pond, it cannot be labeled as "impure"

Jiggyasa said...

words straight from the heart. Good one dear!

A Homemaker's Utopia said...

So pure and lovely..:-)

indu chhibber said...

You said it Valli-so sensitively in a nutshell.

Aparna Anurag said...

lovely..innocent ..touching :-)

Namrata Mahalingam said...

Nice post! :)

ANJALI.N.KUMAR said...

awesome lines! its really fantastic with the words as well as the feel!

kebhari said...

Exquisite image and words!

Ph_ said...

true indeed!

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Simran said...

touching!

The Twenty Something said...

Point well mentioned It's not the mistake of the child who was born due to lust and was left alone in this world, but of those who did not have the heart to give him/her right.

Bianca Ntoyanto said...

Beauty! : )

 

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