Friday, April 19, 2013

My shadow...





Shadow
(Photo by Little Heart Archu)

Lives like me
but feels not like me
Lifeless life

My shadow - It dances when I dance, it smiles when I smile, it runs when I run, does each and everything that I do all my life. But, it can never feel what I feel. Partial life of me! Another emotionless replica!! My forever friend to whom I am unknown!!!

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Himadri Singha said...

The best part is she remains with you till your last day !

Arumugam Easwar said...

Beautiful as usual.

Namrata said...

Beautiful observation :) lovely :)

Sadia Khan said...

Beautifully etched on paper....shadows a part of us , devoid of all feelings..still a never gonna leave friend of us

Green Speck said...

But then again, it is a part of our lives :-)

Rajesh said...

Superb.

Pradip Biswas said...

Shadow forms by blocking the path of Light(Truth)on an opaque(Maya) substance. Maya which takes a bath of truth so it can awaken the vibration of eternal force(life). So while Maya that is our body can feel but the shadow which blocks the path of truth is lifeless and can not respond to feelings.

mysay.in said...

yes indeed a forever friend ... and rightly mentioned lifeless and unknown and this lifeless eternal fren only leaves us when we are invisible and hence lifeless :)
nice thought .. very deep .. perfect Valli Style !!:)

KISLAYA GOPAL said...

Very true!

Annu Yadav said...

after long time you have written , was waiting for your post :)

Bushra said...

Beautifully said Valli:)

a Rat said...

good one.. and very true..

magiceye said...

Beautifully conceived and expressed

Vishal Rathod said...

What a wonderful and meaning Haiku Valli .

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deepak kripal said...

Great thought Valli, a very intriguing one. Lifeless life is a very well said conclusion, you couldn't have said it better. LOVELY ONE dear..

Malini said...

What an intriguing thought!

unshakenthoughts.com said...

What an amazing thought wish our shadows could talk and have feelings!

http://unshakenthoughts.com/2013/04/21/shadows/

Ramesh Sood said...

May be she too feels but doesn't express the way you do...just a point of view...

I liked the way you have thought and created it...

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/i-stand-in-her-light.html

RS

Gemma Wiseman said...

Lovely exploration of the essence of a shadow!

GR said...

Beautifully written ... Loved it !

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Poor shadow!

Paradise in Shadows

neelamhere said...

Just a shadow. Good one.

kaykuala said...

Nicely done Valli!

Hank

Uma Anandane said...

Lovely poem and the image is so wonderful !

Jasmeet Kukreja said...

A few days back i hv written an article on same theme..and your Haiku reminded me to post on my blog....It is again a true fact you potrayed dear....loved this Haiku <3

 

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