Saturday, April 20, 2013

Broken dreams








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RAN IN JAN said...

good one...

asteria's canvass said...

rings true ..

Satya said...

So poetic...
And so very true!!
I loved the words used!

Pradip Biswas said...

Grief waves hits the most but the happy waves do not hit it only sooth.

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice take Valli!:)

Green Speck said...

Repair should start now :P

samar khan said...

Nice

Apni Kahaani said...

Every Indian is feeling this much of pain now a days as series of mis deeds have happened in recent times.... :(

Vishal Rathod said...

Its wrong to say but no one can match you. You have sheer class. Tsunami in heart.

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a Rat said...

painful.. good one..

mysay.in said...

:) few words used and everything expressed .. Valli rocks !!

sahi said...

haiku!!!

Uppal said...

Hi,'loved the rhythm and pain so well expressed!

Ramesh Sood said...

That's very nicely done..good take on Tsunami..

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/tilted-earth-haiku.html

RS

KISLAYA GOPAL said...

Yes thats true. Heart grieves when dreams are shattered.

mindlovemisery said...

Ooooh I liked it =)

Unlike bark said...

its broken and the broken pieces have sharp edges!

Sam Edge said...

nice

neelamhere said...

Suppressed emotions come with a cost.

Panchali said...

ahh...I am not surprised, Valli. Just beautiful~

Rupertt Wind said...

How do you manage to use so little words and convey powerful emotions? Hats off to you dear.

Ritesh Agarwal said...

great choice of words...and i loved the pic

Saru Singhal said...

Beautiful, I must learn the art of writing haiku from you.

Reading Pleasure said...

very nice take and well written

shivani said...

Wow... Word picture this. Very expressive. Thanks for sharing. :)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Power packed, Valli:)

S. Anupam said...

The Broken Dreams must now find a way to come out of this height of grief and that can't happen without unattachment from the process..

 

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