Friday, March 01, 2013

Depressed...





depression
Photo by Puvi Joshi (Mint Icetea Photography)

Disturbed and depressed soul
stares towards the hole,
She could sense and consume all dark
deeply covered with hollow marks
she stands at her balcony
trying to escape the melancholy
there the cold breeze had tickled her before
But now, she finds it soothing no more
Now, the music seems like noise
and silence has captured her voice
The beautiful sight of the rose
calms not her worries or woes
She looks across those shining stars in the dark sky
Sadly, It wasn't pleasing, wasn't pleasing to her eye
This is her life now, to live in the pain's shadow,
and to regret the decisions and broken vows!



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Green Speck said...

That's a tough life to lead !!!

Mary said...

So true that oftentimes things that had made someone happy when they were not depressed doesn't work when they are depressed. Your example of music, for example. And somehow even flowers don't bring joy. I think your poem characterized depression very well.

Ashitha said...

Back to blogosphere after a long time..Urs is the first post I pondered.. Well-written dear. Beautiful narration..Could see it before eyes.

Jay Singh said...

Hi Valli,

Oh, depression in the morning, nobody should live a life of depression & regret. Always find reasons to be happy and bring a smile to one's own face as well as the faces of others.

Regards

Jay
My Blog

Mridula said...

This too shall pass?

Indrani said...

Hope it is just a passing phase. :)
Have a happy weekend!

saikat mbka ghosh said...

melancholic !!
but c will get over dis phase soon,,life is too big for broken promises ....life goes on :)
nice poetry as always though it was a sad one :)

aliasgarmukhtiar mukhtiar said...

tough

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

There is always a time to move on, to give life another chance.

Very nicely penned.

TTT said...

sad but beautifully written ...

sushmitha said...

Touching words..

Saru Singhal said...

I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem. The part where you talked about the breeze, silence and music sound so real.

vanderloost said...

The picture painted is very vivid

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Arumugam Easwar said...

Beautiful!

Grace said...

To live in pain's shadow is very sad. Good one ~

indu chhibber said...

No doubt all this happens when one is depressed-you have described it accurately.But one has the power to pull out of it INSIDE!

Rajesh said...

Very sensitive.

A Homemaker's Utopia said...

Lovely lines..:-)

Jyoti Mishra said...

such times when u feel like..
alone is something you'll be quite a lot

Soumi Sarkar said...

It's really nice. :)
You have real good writing skills. Keep up the work and keep writing more, that way you'll learn and improve more. :)

Gracy said...

Such an awesome poem! Touches the soul. Our life takes shape according to the choices we make. I love your style of writing. Well done :-)
Cheers!
Gracy
www.gracydsouza.com

Sabyasachi Patra | Tales from Wild India said...

Life is not to be lived with regrets.

Pradyumna Ray said...

Nicely written..

MANU PRAKASH TYAGI said...

nice

cifar shayar said...

emotions came out beautifully in this poem,very well written

Namrata said...

Beautiful dear..:)

Panchali said...

The flow of words within each meter is amazing, Valli. Love this!

Satya Rekha Ramaswamy said...

I LOVED this...
And I also noticed that we think in similar lines..
Our ideas collide!!

Surbhi Bafna said...

Hey Valli
'regret the decisions and broken vows'
I wish the gloomy soul finds the gleam at the end of the hole. The pain can be easily felt.
Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)

 

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