Thursday, February 07, 2013

Red





fingers on torch

Fingers on torch; white
rays turned red, Child amused when
he saw it first time

Chillies looking hot
Its color tempting me lot
taste buds warn "Try not!"

Pretty girl in white
takes off red umbrella to
feel the joy of rain!

 A smile lit up his
face, while reading letter with
lipstick impressions

Written for Haiku Heights



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Green Speck said...

Wow ... loved the red haiku :-)

Aunt Mary said...

Again a lovely poem Valli very nicely written.

Himadri Singha said...

You give life to mundane things :)

aliasgarmukhtiar mukhtiar said...

lovely

Ajay Kontham said...

Different emotions - Nice penned. :)

saikat mbka ghosh said...

lovely feel good haiku !! loved d simplicity :)

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

First two are very creative take on the prompt and my favourite too.

Chhavi Vatwani said...

Wow! Loved the chilies one! :D

Bushra said...

wow!Nicely portrayed:)

cifar shayar said...

Nice haiku simple and effective

Satya Rekha Ramaswamy said...

Valli... I loved all the Haikus... Watta compilation!!!

Medha Chaitanya said...

Awesome :-):-):-)

Vishal Rathod said...

Once again nice one Valli .

Tarang Sinha said...

Interesting take on RED! First one reminded me of childhood...:) Nice set indeed!:)

TTT said...

wow ! i especially loved the first one ...

Panchali said...

Beautiful reds..but, the last one is my fave :))

Nandini Deka said...

Wow...really cool. very nicely described

Brad Dugg said...

very nicely written valli

Murali Krishna Reddy N V said...

keka :)

Guspazha Chinar said...

Wow those were amazing haikus! All were equally wonderful. Thanks for spreading the love with red :)

Jasmeet Kukreja said...

Valli...u again mske me speechless from all ur Haiku..loved l of them and truly m learing from u :-)

scriptwhiz said...

What a pleasure to read these Haiku. I loved them all; the first two are my favourites :-)

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Zunnur said...

Lovely haikus! I love the way you combine the whites and reds. And the love letter is so sweet!

odyzz said...

The RED compositions are vibrant ..loved them all :)

Susan Daniels said...

These are all great, but I loved that third one.

sathish kumar said...

the one last stole my heart :)

Vaishali Jain said...

I liked all of them. The chilli one, the pretty girl one are really interesting. The last one is vivid. :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I love the one about the seductive lipstick impressions!

Scarlet Letters

Susan said...

What I like best is how visual the effect--favorite: putting away the red umbrella--
literally vivid, symbolically peace follows alarm!

Ramesh Sood said...

I liked the second one.. amazingly creative and very beautiful.. first has its own value..of course..

RS:)

Emma Major said...

I love the first haiku. perfect

Reshma said...

loved the simplicity of the first Haiku, it conveys the curiosity of childhood beautifully... we both seemed to have drawn inspiration from chillies:) loved your take on it.

eof777 said...

You did a lovely job with the range of haiku created. ;-)
Eliz

 

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