Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Dawn and dreams





dreaming girl


When dawn kissed the sky,
sky blushed to golden and my
golden dreams faded...

*~*~*

When dreams kiss my eyes,
with wings of peace my soul flies
until dawn arrives...

Written for Haiku Heights




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Ajay Kontham said...

Beautifully Penned. :)

Crystal said...

Oh so beautiful.. you are very talented and the image fits perfectly. It has that dreamy appeal

aryan tan said...

cute, pretty and beautiful piece of work :)

Vishal Rathod said...

Lovely Valli. keep Writing and make people happy.

Panchali said...

Aah...so serene, so beautiful!! You're a true poet!

deepak kripal said...

Beautiful haiku Valli.. You have superbly correlated the cycle of nature with soul..

Good one.. Keep writing dear..

sathish kumar said...

aha! Magical... Totally magical...

Bikramjit said...

That is a beautiful poem, loved it .. I will say full of dreams

Bikram's

Arumugam Easwar said...

Dawn vs dreams. Beautiful!

Umesh Awasthi said...

Really beautiful and perfect!
really written beautifully

Ashish said...

you are an inspiration, valli.

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

Wow! That's poetry!!

Tarang Sinha said...

Lovely set Valli...beautifully crafted...really!!:)

TTT said...

absolutely gorgeous !

Jay Singh said...

Hi Valli,

Perfect post depicting the time from dawn to dusk and that too with the soulful music of Zara Zara playing in the background, mesmerizing.

Regards

Jay
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Sadia Khan said...

Wow thats so lovely..:)

sheshnath said...

Both Haikus inspire me much. These are the blosome of petals of heart

Grace said...

I like the dreams fading and arriving ~ Good one ~

the little princess said...

lovely!!

Satya Rekha Ramaswamy said...

The first set is amazing... Very poetic...

D.Nambiar said...

Wow. You think 'beautifully' :)

unshakenthoughts.com said...

Neat! hope-filled...

kaykuala said...

Dreams have a way of fading and of coming back to fulfill yet another dream. Nicely Valli!

Hank

Enigmatic Soul said...

Gorgeous imagery. I love it.

debu said...

with wings of peace...my soul flies....up for keeps ... good one

eof777 said...

This is woonderfuul and I love the stars floating by... ;-)
Eliz

eof777 said...

I thought I had corrected that silly spelling... I meant wonderful! :-)

SRUTHI HARIDAS said...

let your golden dreams never fade..lovely haiku indeed.:)

 

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