Monday, November 05, 2012

Unwanted silence





unwanted silence
(Image taken from here)

Unresolved fight; room
filled with silence...now, broken
by the slam of door!

--x--

Veil of silence masks
their true feelings; Aren't they
so close, yet so far!?


Written for Haiku Heights



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Green Speck said...

Tough moments when you are close yet so far !!!

Tarang Sinha said...

It seems so...Nice set Valli! And nice music in your blog. And yes I have translated the book review in my comment section :)

Nirvana said...

Lovely Haiku...

Sayantini Bhattacharya said...

This was really very adorable. I can feel the warmth. Nice work Valli!

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Meenakshi Malhotra said...

beautiful feelings conveyed through few words...great Valli

Saru Singhal said...

Second one is profound. Beautiful writing!

Ellecee said...

I have experienced both of these situations you describe so well with your haiku. "so close, yet so far" it's so sad when that happens to us.

deepak kripal said...

silently beautiful..

indu chhibber said...

Nice lines but one person ought to make the first move-no ?

Renju said...

Close. .yet so far. . really a painful situation. . which cant be put in words. .

Panchali said...

I could almost hear the sound of the banging door...amazing!Very well written...

KARTHIKA VARMA said...

No words to say. Really Awesome dear . Very innovative blog. took me to a dreamy world . Thank you very much :)

Listening Daisy said...

I especially love your last "so close yet so far".

Rick.Daddario said...

aloha Valli - both of these haiku follow from a keen observation of human nature and relationships. i like the twists that you bring out in each:
"close yet so far (apart)" and "the slam of a door". i like both of those last lines in your haiku. aloha

Grace said...

I can relate to your haiku ~ Unresolved fights can be very straining to the relationship ~ Good one ~

Chai Biscoot said...

you were right when you commented on my post on silence... indeed you too have beautifully captured the agony of silence.... Wish you happiness valli...

Brudberg said...

Silence can indeed be cold and hostile.

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Oh, indeed! Not all silence is golden or welcome!

Deep Desert Silence

Satya Rekha Ramaswamy said...

First one was the best...
Slam of the door!

 

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