Sunday, October 14, 2012

Love that doesn't reciprocate...





not loved back
Photo by Jean Fan (JFotography)

When my love tune
couldn't touch your heart's core
When my love key
couldn't open your heart's door

Feelings in our heart never resonate
and my mute love doesn't reciprocate...

It is like a wordless song
with the lyric of silence
It is like a mute sound
of one hand clapping

Feelings are deep with the rhythm of void
But sadly, they go unheard forever...

Telugu version of this poem: Here



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Indrani said...

Well written.

Rajrupa Gupta said...

Nice! When these emotions occur, it is the time to let go! :)

Green Speck said...

It's sad when feelings go unheard !!!

Siny U K Nair said...

loved it :) very true!!

Akshay Kumar G said...

Sad yet beautiful. I could very well relate to this poem, Valli. Wonderfully expressed emotions. :)

sathish kumar said...

summary of a book in just few lines. Touched.

Anupam Patra said...

Aahh!!! Valli That is very poignant.
Let's hope that the feelings are heard by the best ears

rohan810in said...

<3 it! Awesome!

Ghazala Hossain said...

So sad but so soulful ~

amarjeet singh said...

Soulful...it reminded me of one of Amrita Pritam's lines..."I feel that my entire life is a love letter written to you...if anyhow it reaches you someday...I will no longer have the dependency of words"
If you understand hindi go through
http://recklesspen.blogspot.in/2010/10/blog-post_11.html

✿Sie✿ said...

I agree Valli because I have felt it..well written as usual..visiting you ;)

DementedSage said...

Absolutely bang on! Touched my heart!

Jasmeet Kukreja said...

Intense ....

Upasana said...

Poignant! Beautiful!

Ashitha said...

wonderful one Sri.. I really liked all those oxymorons, wordless song, lyric of silence, mute sound and one hand clapping...Beautiful

Swarnali said...

Beautiful and poignant...the rhythm in your poem is really amazing..:)

A.Sankara Narayanan said...

Nice post,

your blog really looks awesome.

keep it up

Jagathi said...

very beautifully written...and a gr8 blog too...:)

Devilish Angel said...

Expressed well...

odyzz said...

Wow!! you have conveyed the emotions so wonderfully.. :)

AYUSHI... said...

your poem has a mesmerizing effect on me.. I loved this.. :))

Rahul Bhatia said...

Lovely words, Valli:)

the little princess said...

life is not always a fairy tale..and such emotions leave a deep scar on ur heart...but the best way to get rid of these feelings is to think, whatever happens is always for the best!

Zunnur said...

I love the way your poem rhymes in the first stanza, very well written, Valli!
Love belongs to the heart and its hard to describe in words. Sometimes its just painful when such feelings are kept unvoiced.

Panchali said...

honestly sad when emotions and love go 'unheard'---how did i miss this!
sorry for stepping in late, valli! lovely...

A.Sankara Narayanan said...

Poem is very nice.

your website is colorful, looks good...

Keep it up.

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

Hi! I am first timer on your blog, beautiful! Music couldn't be more apt, a treat to senses!!!
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Aswathy said...

You made my eyes wet. Well said.
Love that doesn't reciprocate has no value at all. But dat doesn't mean the love was ever false.
Realised one thing,.
Love the one who deserve and accept you,rather than waiting.

Keep writing

indu chhibber said...

It is time to break free then.

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

Satya said...

I dunno wat to say...
Just AWESOME

 

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