Saturday, September 08, 2012

Silent cry







Frozen tears
render silent cry;
Heavy heart!


Written for Haiku Heights



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Tarang Sinha said...

Nice one Valli!

Green Speck said...

A very beautiful rendition of sorrow !!!

Ellecee said...

Tender and sad. "heavy heart" indeed.

Stephen Mumble said...

Lovely haiku - despite the depth of melancholy.

joanne said...

a heavy heart is so difficult to bear....let those tears flow!

Mark M. Redfearn said...

Great sorrow here...


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Jasmeet Kukreja said...

Heavy heart...intense. Loved the haiku

TTT said...

intense !

Simran said...

render silent cry for frozen heart!
Touching! beautifully done Valli :) <3

Blahblaholic ♥ © said...

Silence says a lot.
A silent cry, even more .. :)

@Tales of her and by her.
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@Teenage Babblings
xx

Rahul Bhatia said...

Very nice writing Valli:)

vinishashah said...

immensely painful

Geetansh Gupta said...

Valli i really appreciate ur work.. Hatts off

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

 

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