Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Rain in my eyes





crystal tears

It rains in my eyes
when turmoil of sorrow hits
and pierce my heart

Written for Haiku Heights



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Green Speck said...

Ad yet beautiful ... loved the strong emotions here !!!

MAHARUKH said...

BEAUTIFUL EYES FIRSTLY! <3


the composition has heartfelt feelings loved them!
Great Haiku...

Pranita said...

Sad... i hope happiness dwells again!
Virgin happiness!

Kathy Donlan said...

sad and lovely!

Kristjaan Panneman said...

What a sad feeling ... well written Valli

unfetteredbs said...

so sad

Leo said...

Agree with Speck.. sad but beautiful :)

Ellecee said...

I agree, sad but beautiful. The emotional pull is strong.

Judith Westerfield said...

I so like the picture you paint with the words - even better than the actual photo

PattiKen said...

Beautifully sad and very touching.

Crystal said...

I love the expressionism here.. it's beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

Dipika Syngai said...

I'm very touched by this Haiku!

You have a lovely blog!!<3 Hope you check out mine too, I'm a poet/writer as well...I'm also into fashion....guess I'm a little bit of everything, lol! ^_^

xoxo' Dipika

www.dipikasyngai.blogspot.com

Ramesh Sood said...

Well I also found 'rain in the eyes' for my blog for an inspiration..well done.

RS:)

Grace said...

Lovely use of rain as a metaphor ~ Nice one ~

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Eye rain is sad, so sad...

Seven Rains

Locomente said...

Turmoil of sorrow...
Rain in eyes...
Liked those expressions..

http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html

Reading Pleasure said...

Beautifully sad and yet powerful

Sreedevi Menon said...

Really touching dear... :)

Ranita Sinha said...

So touchy, painful and full of meaning..

sathish kumar said...

Poignant.

AmitAag said...

..enormous!

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

Satya said...

This is so beautiful...
Heartfelt! :)

 

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