Monday, September 03, 2012

Moon fantasies







Dreamy girl;
She fancies crescent
moon as swing!

---x---

She stares at moon and
slips into fantasy world;
Beautiful silence


Written for Haiku Heights



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Green Speck said...

Moon as swing - wow, that was really unique !!!

MAHARUKH said...

indeed a beautiful fantasy and lovely pics :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Well it is simply beautiful...loved it ..

RS:)

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Wonderfully composed haiku. Very touching.

Grace said...

I like that beautiful silence ~

poetry-diary.com said...

I do like the first one - fits the image very well.

Ellecee said...

These are lovely. I like to think of the "moon as swing" ,

PattiKen said...

This is a dreamy look at the moon.

Loredana Donovan said...

Very dreamy! :)

Nimue said...

love the second verse .. and the image too .. how i wish my room to have such window :)

Locomente said...

Yeah...
Moon has that effect!

beccagivens said...

I like "Moon as Swing"
September Heights - Choreographing Stars

Mariya Koleva said...

I like them both, but the first one grabbed me for real!

Best, MK

kaykuala said...

It's nice to dream! The moon has been an inspiration for lovers since time began. If only Neil Armstrong could tell them otherwise! Nicely, Valli!

Hank

Reading Pleasure said...

And beautiful words

Susan said...

I love the Haiku relating the girl's fantasies, being a tool of her imagination!

Leo said...

Know many girls like that. Quite nice :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Lovely set of haiku and really nice pictures!:)

smarkan said...

Lovely peaceful haiku

Stephen Mumble said...

Oh that is a lovely take on the challenge :)

vinishashah said...

it was beautiful :)

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

Words N Me said...

I am so much in love with moon.. i have some ajeeb sa passion for moon...

 

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