Monday, September 03, 2012

Lonely girl...






(Image taken from here)

A rainbow
seems colorless to
her sad eyes

---x---

Lonely girl
looks for someone to
paint her world


Written for Haiku Heights, Tackle it Tuesday



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Locomente said...

Rainbow seemed colorless...
I loved this line!!!!

Green Speck said...

The 2nd stanza blew me off ... amazing !!!

Grace said...

The first one is clear and lovely example ~

Nice set ~

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I wonder what would happen if lonely girl would pick up a brush and paint her own world...

A Long Loneliness

The Happy Amateur said...

True, colors fade when we feel lonely. Hope she finds someone soon :-)

Stephen Mumble said...

Oh my. Your haiku for loneliness is incredibly powerful. Made me tear up and catch my breath.
We all need someone to help colour our world - and it seems so hard to find someone with the right palette...

odyzz said...

how beautifully you have imagined and painted your haiku...loved it..

Reading Pleasure said...

These are fine lines.

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Valli ... this is such a pleasure to read these haiku ... really wonderful.

MAHARUKH said...

loved the easy flow! amazing valli!
I can totally feel her...

poetry-diary.com said...

I liked the rainbow one - communicates the feeling so well visually.

Jolly said...

Particularly loved the rainbow one ... so true...

beccagivens said...

The second one is my choice of the two ...

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Ranita Sinha said...

Both are lovely..deep and touchy..

AmitAag said...

lovely!(though lonely:))

indu chhibber said...

Haiku with tender feelings,valli.

TTT said...

wow ...i can feel the pain and loneliness.

Vijay Shenoy said...

Good one... enjoyed reading your blog post... keep them coming

joanne said...

a gray rainbow.... very thoughtful haiku, and a bit sad, as despair is prone to be!

Leonid Singha said...

Hi, you people are good. keep sharing.

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

 

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