Wednesday, September 05, 2012

I am sad






Photo by Little Heart Archu

I'm sad...
I'm sad...

sad like
colorless rainbow...
sad like
broken window...

sad like
parched land..So dry!
sad like
starless empty vast sky

sad like
burnt buds....that never bloom
sad like
long pause with no resume

sad like
leafless old hollow tree
sad like
pinned butterfly waiting to be free....



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TTT said...

this is so sad ... but the lines are beautiful ! reflecting the pain and loneliness

Tarang Sinha said...

Don't be sad Valli...:):)
This is beautiful! I liked "Sad like long pause with no resume" :)

Ranita Sinha said...

Melancholic!!!!

Green Speck said...

Don't be sad ... cheer up :-)

vinishashah said...

valli thats really sad one but the way you have written it is really beautiful......loved it

AmitAag said...

lovely...and sorely touching!

Mr.Jovita said...

:(

Bikramjit said...

Well take care and for what its worth this time will pass too bringing back the smiles and good times

take care

Bikram's

Madhu Mathi said...

Wonderful lines!! :)

indu chhibber said...

Mind blowing thoughts,such comparisons,you take my breath away.
But do not be so sad,i hope this is only fiction.

Saru Singhal said...

Oh! you made me sad. It reminds me of the poem 'It Hurts' I wrote last year...

jaish_vats said...

Oh Oh! Please cheer up :D

amit ganguly said...

The butterfly will be free indeed.

Unknown said...

hehe ur poem made me more sad :')

Jen..The Butterfly Effect said...

Valliiiiiii!!! <3

Come on ya! There are much better things in life you are going to be blessed with!!! Come on gal!!! You deserve much better and always remember you are the best!!! :)

Luv ya!

Rupertt Wind said...

That's poignant yet beautiful, Its the colors of emotions that give a poem vibrancy and yours is buzzing with life.

Osho Garg said...

No Words For Your Poetry :(

Read Daily So Many Blogs. But Never Read Like Your Blog :)

I Pray To God That You Will Write
I'm Happy
I'm Happy
In Coming Days :)

Harshad mehta said...

Touching words! Words that takes in that world where pain persist. Well rendered.

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

 

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