Monday, July 23, 2012

Emptiness





emptiness

Holes of vacuum
piercing heart
Thoughts of void
dwell in dark

Silence...
Killing silence...
You can't hear
your own voice

You see nothing,
just nothing
not even your own
shadow....

You scream out loud
seeking for help
Your voice is lost
your echo unheard

You wander here
and there
totally unaware
where to go

Circling ideas
taking you no where
You end up at same place
where you started

Sometimes...
You don't know
what you want
what you need

You just feel numb
You just feel dead

You drench in rain
of hollowness
And silently sing
the memories of pain

Aimless
You don't know
your niche, There is no vision, no light
Clueless
You don't know
how to solve this life's puzzle right

Wait...
Endless wait
to break this repeating
cycle of emptiness...


Written for One Single Impression



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♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

You're multi talented, girl! :D

Jasmeet Kukreja said...

True perception....loved readong it

J Cosmo Newbery said...

I feel a longing, a searching. Somewhere, sometime, somehow,when you least expect it, you will see the niche that calls to you.

The Write Girl said...

It is sad when you cannot find your niche. You express the pain of such a feeling so beautifully.

vinisha said...

wonderfully written ....especially that last line ....love it :)

AmitAag said...

sadness epitomized beautifully..nice poem, Valli, and the sketch too!

saikat mbka ghosh said...

nice lines describing emptiness which alas of humans dead or alive...have gone through in their life...u really brought out that emotion exceptionally...

ps:if u r sad, plz cheer up coz its life dnt take it seriously :P :D

expression said...

lovely..........

anu

Green Speck said...

Lovely poem .... terrific and mind boggling !!!

Rahul Bhatia said...

Cycle of emptiness , very apt ending, Valli:)

indu chhibber said...

very real thought-flow & expression.

Panchali said...

Valli, your words emote brilliantly. Very well written :)

Patti said...

This is beautiful... I read it a few times and it gives a lot to think about. We have all been there and after the wait things tend to pick up and go a different direction; but we have all been there...

Indrajeet Bhuyan said...

Awsm

Raj said...

Deep, philosophically and emotionally rich, potent and thought provoking! You crystallized the vacuum inside so beautifully. You conveyed so much in so few words. Brilliant indeed.

Grace said...

What a sad write of numbing emptiness ~ Nice one ~

Locomente said...

Finding the niche is the ultimate...
The most difficult...
Beauty it is!!!

Amruta Marwah said...

A beautiful poem with a lot of meaning.. Keep up the good work!!

mysay.in said...

probably felt by few or may be all... very nice lines very touching ..all the more when one has been through this emptiness ! very very nice !

expression said...

i'm touched...

anu

Vållῐ ★☆ said...

Thanks for the read everyone :)

 

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