Saturday, April 28, 2012

Tears! - My definition





tears drawn with kajal

Moistly smoke called tears
evolve, when the heart gets singed
with enormous grief!

How is the picture? This is one of my favorite pictures...I randomly drew it on my hand by kajal :)

Written for Haiku Heights



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AmitAag said...

My dilemma is, Valli, whether the poem is more beautiful or the drawing:) The backdrop of hand is making it more vivid:)

Pranita said...

Wow..! That;s on ur hand?!!! UR very creative! :)
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Mohinee said...

True expression Valli. Very true. and pic is unbelievable, how did you do it so beautifully that too on hand by Kajal..lovely.

CYNOSURE said...

a truth beautifully crafted...excellent one Valli... :)

Jaideep said...

Creative!!!, never imagined you writing this, different style, good one :)

Surbhi said...

BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED VALLI :) AND VERY NICE PICTURE .. :)

✿Sie✿ said...

this is so true Valli and you really draw well..visiting you and I am just smiling being here..honestly visiting you all gives me a relief from my busy days ;)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Tears as smoke...a veiled image!

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Ellecee said...

Love you picture, your haiku and the music. This is the first time on a good receiver so I can see and hear everything. Thank you.

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

deep haiku ~ aware ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

Chevrefeuille said...

Nice Valli

vaisakhi said...

beautiful line beautiful pic...:)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read everyone :)

εїз Q Ŧ ¶ εїз said...

Nice ..!! Btw may b it needz sme Correction d word mst b "signed" and not "Singed" if am aint wrong ??

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

@All
Thanks for the read :)
@Prathi....It is singed only....which means....burnt...

 

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