Monday, April 02, 2012

Love raindrops






Photo by Zoe Wiezo

Sad, deserted and
lonely heart longing to drench
in raindrops of love

And the rain falls...

Raindrops of love heals
those wounds of emptiness; And
the heart blooms with joy!


Written for Haiku Heights



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Ramesh Sood said...

A great love story weaved here.. lovely..

S Jayanth said...

good one.. :)

my entry for the same prompt :
http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/02/mine-self-exile-haiku-3/

Grace said...

I hope it always blooms with joy~

Grace said...

I hope the heart always blooms with joy ~

CYNOSURE said...

lovely haiku...excellent... :)

Ellecee said...

"the heart blooms with joy" Such a nice line. I enjoyed both of your haiku today.

Invisible Silence said...

loved it:)

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Delightful, loving and insightful haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

Gemma Wiseman said...

Dramatic use of the word "drench"! Adds a powerful feel to the haiku!

✿Sie✿ said...

hoping for those love raindrops to last ;)

Jeannette, said...

so true...love heals when we feel deserted...

nice haiku...

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful haiku!:)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Raindrops of love have a healing effect

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

May the deserted heart always be drenched with the raindrops of love!

Deserted Branches

Karen said...

Lovely and romantic!

Simran said...

The best one of yours !

Chevrefeuille said...

Great set of haiku. In a few words you write a wonderful love story.

Namaste

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Rameshji,Jayanth,Grace,Cynosure,Invisible silence,Ellecee,Carol,Gemma,Sie,Jeanette,Tarang,Rahulji,Magical Mystical Teacher,Karen, Simi and Chev :)

Hemant said...

And thn the rain again leaves u...for a longer time..u need to wait for rain to come back again..the poem is less about love and more about hope....nice attempt...small and beautiful with lots of meaning.

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Yup!..True Hemant...Thanks for the read :)

Locomente said...

Its so beautiful Valli...

 

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