Saturday, April 07, 2012

Forgive me please!






(Image taken from here)

Bars of guilt surrounds
all over, leaving me remorsed,
humiliated

Free my tormented
heart from jaws of guilt with kind
virtue - forgiveness!


Written for Haiku Heights



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S Jayanth said...

flowing expression.. nice one..

CYNOSURE said...

beautiful Haiku indeed... :)

Ramesh Sood said...

I think you did well here..seeking forgiveness is a great virtue..

Kajal said...

Beautiful and you have a point.. One can truly feel guilt free if one accepts and stays humble. Loved it

Ellecee said...

I enjoyed your haiku. A plea for forgiveness so well written.

Grace said...

Forgiveness frees us from our guilt and torment ~

Pranita said...

Very beautiful Haiku.. and very true..! When guilty, and forgiveness is not given, it's the worst feeling one can go thru i think!

AmitAag said...

Very beautiful, Valli!

AmitAag said...

Wow! what a wonderful cursor you have given on your blog! ...Don't feel like leaving:)

kaykuala said...

Very true! To forgive is to cleanse oneself but difficult for some who want to get even! But your haiku had said it brilliantly!

Hank

Tarang Sinha said...

Wonderful set of haiku and great photo:)

Chevrefeuille said...

Awesome ... a wonderful haiku set with a deeper meaning, written with a lot of feeling.

Namaste

Mohinee said...

Something similar posted on Forgive prompt very beautiful...

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

There's nothing more freeing than forgiveness.

Will She Forgive Us?

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Jayanth,Cynosure,Rameshji,Kajal,Ellecee,Grace,Pranitha,AmitAag,Kaykuala,Tarang,Chev,Mohini,MMT :)

 

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