Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Beware!






(Image taken from here)

Defeated
enemy filled with
rage, Exploits

Exploits your
every possible
weakness, Beware!


Written for Haiku Heights



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S Jayanth said...

a war strategy indeed!!!

and also one thing we need to learn in life, to defend ourselves when the enemy exploits in rage.!!! :)

Ramesh Sood said...

BEWARE!!!! YES.. VERY ESSENTIAL LESSON HERE..

CYNOSURE said...

a nice message...very important for everyone... :)

Surbhi said...

"Beware" very necesaary for one to live happily ..nice 1 :)

Ellecee said...

"beware" Such good advice and well written haiku

Pranita said...

Wow... Such a true haiku... Simple and straight message, but very true and imprtant!

Gemma Wiseman said...

Rage can be an unpredictable enemy! It is best to take care! Lovely ideas!

Chevrefeuille said...

Well done Valli

AmitAag said...

Beautifully expressed, Valli!

dhruv solanki said...

interesting... enlightening......

Shamsud said...

profound!

Mariya Koleva said...

This is an amazing set of haiku! Wonderfully-done! Bravo

PattiKen said...

Oh, I like this. A different approach to possibility.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I'd like to think that I don't have any enemies, people who would exploit me, but I know that's not true!

“Maybe Raven Knows”

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read everyone :)

 

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