Sunday, April 01, 2012

Baby bird






(Image taken from here)

Can a baby bird
ever fly if it isn't eager
to hug the sky?


Written for Haiku Heights



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Teresa said...

I love that image of hugging the sky. Great poem.

♥●• İzdihër •●♥ said...

awe so cute.

Bruce Miller said...

What a nice haiku!

Grace said...

I like the enthusiasm... hug the sky ~

http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/03/eager.html

Ellecee said...

A really sweet haiku. Thank you

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I would say the answer to your question is a resounding NO! :)

Eager to Write Haiku

Karen said...

Oh, that's lovely!

✿Sie✿ said...

a baby bird can still fly because it is created to fly..maybe not immediately but there will come a time it will learn to fly..but in life we can't fly if we are not willing to learn..visiting you Valli ;)

Ramesh Sood said...

No it cannot...aren't we talking about something more than eagerness..perhaps curiosity too..

Chevrefeuille said...

Good day Valli, again a challenge to write haiku, just as the one of few miles. Nice to see you again in this challenge.
This haiku is very well done, lovely imagery you paint with these words.

Namaste

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

sweet haiku as well as contemplative ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

Leo said...

Succinct. Lovely take to the word eager..

However, I just urge you to check the second line again.. I'm not sure of it being syllabically on target.

Flavorwise, this was tops!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Teresa, Izdiher, Bruce,Grace,Ellecee,Magical Mystical Teacher, Karen,Sie, Rameshji,Chev,Carol, Leo :)

Mohinee said...

Very very inspirational, loved it..:)

AmitAag said...

Wonderful, Valli!

Kendall said...

Thanks for sharing. Love the image of a fledgling bird.

 

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