Sunday, April 15, 2012

Am I really alive ?






(Image taken from here)

If I die
every
spell from suffering, Am I
really alive?

really alive?
Is my life worthwhile? or just
a mere survival?



Written for Haiku Heights



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Tarang Sinha said...

Very thought-provoking piece of writing!

Rupertt Wind said...

Thast beautiful! whether my life is worthwhile? that is one tough question to answer. when we die wouldnt we all be asking ourself this question, did we live or in the pretext of living did we miss the whole life? I guess its ananswer one has to find out the hard way!

Enigmatic Soul said...

The power of despair captured in your words. Well written.

Grace said...

I used this same picture when the prompt was Famine ~ Very sad and touching ~

S Jayanth said...

true and insightful..

Pranita said...

OMG! A very moving Haiku... My heart goes out for people who are alive, but as good as dead!

Ramesh Sood said...

I think the picture limits the thought.. your question need to be asked by everyone..in any situation.. well done..

MyWordsWhisper said...

So sad to think what some have to endure. You captured this very well.

Chevrefeuille said...

Wow! Valli what a strong haiku. In combination with the picture very strong one.

dhruv solanki said...

the question raise in this haiku is really an insightful and of great importance.....
makes you think about your existence....introspect......

CYNOSURE said...

great one Valli...it gave rise to some "n" number of questions...amazing set... :)

AmitAag said...

Very nice, Valli! ...and touching too!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read everyone :)

 

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