Monday, February 27, 2012

Open the gate of your heart for the one who deserves to be in there






(Image taken from here)

Your heart has a gate
Open it for the one who's worth
being part in your heart

Your heart has a gate
Shut it for the one who could
pierce it and tear it apart



Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 27 – February 27th – Theme Paint the image



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SweetTalkingGuy said...

Open up to love, shut out all that hate, don't go sitting on the gate... (sorry about that) some things just make me wanna sing!!

Sui generis Writer said...

Short and meaningful. Lovely poetry.
Have a nice day! :)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Nice one

Pranali Kadam said...

I loved the Romantic tuch to the Haiku!
Good one,Valli :)

CYNOSURE said...

perfect one valli... :)

Mara-The Poetic Homemaker said...

I totally agree with this poem, but sometimes, it can be hard to close that gate if we are too attached to a person that we should not be attached to anymore.

-Mara
http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com

Asni said...

Oh this is lovely! A different take on the image. You've given it a loving twist!

Lolamouse said...

Yes, one does need to be careful for whom one opens the gate to one's heart!

Ellecee said...

I like this Valli, this we should do. Protect ourselves in love but not to much :-)

becca givens said...

We risk much in love -- the commitment of love and the blessings from it bring more to us in outpouring benefits!
Here is my Day 27.

kalyan said...

if it is for haiku challenge it will win the challenge.... if it is for life it will win the hearts of readers.... finite haiku yet true haiku :)

Susie Clevenger said...

Beautiful...we should guard well the gates or our heart

Grace said...

Nice and romantic...but I should tell you that your link at SIS blog is not correctly going to this page.

Happy day ~

Sagittarian said...

I love it, my heart is always open to all but I have one special gate here in my heart that only belongs to the one I love most..:) Thanks for this wonderful haiku..:) smile..:)

✿Sie✿ said...

so true Valli..all I can say now I have been there and I have really learned my lesson so well..passing by ;0

Chèvrefeuille said...

Well done Valli, lovely take on the theme. The gate to your heart wonderfully found.

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read SweetTalkingGuy, Sui generis Writer, Rahulji, Pranali,Cynosure,Mara~The poetic Homemaker,Asni,Lolamouse,Ellecee,Becca,Kalyan,Susie,Grace,Sagittarian,Sie,Chevrefeuille :)

 

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