Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Oh dear past! Please let me go!





haunting past
Photo by Divs-M

Memories of my past
Haunt me like shadow
Pushing me to drown
In the quicksand of sorrow
 

Poisonous fumes of past
Withers away buds of my new dreams
Who can understand my pain?
Who can listen to my mid-night silent screams?

Oh dear past! Don't hold me back!
Please let me go!
Let me live my life
With full sparkle glow!



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sajeed's Blog said...

As usual.. awesome valli...

Siny U K Nair said...

Hey Valli...

Same thoughts here :( My past is haunting me :|

Lovely poem :) Loved it :)

Little Heart said...

Nice poem with few lines. loved it.

PRANEETH said...

bagundiii....asusual rocking and sad...

sowmya said...

memories of past really comes in our mind fast :) very nice valli :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

The past does not let us live..
It always holds us back.
Nicely written :)

Thank you for your comment. Do come by again :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

I think it is the past that has always held us back and stopped from letting go. Letting go of the past might help letting go of many things.

Nice post.


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

SR Sweeya Pisupati said...

gudone !

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☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Sajeed, Siny, Little Heart, Praneeth, Soumya, Philo, Blasphemous Aesthete, Sweeya :)

Louise Hernan said...

Very cool title and very emotional poem - good job Valli!! It's true too - a person's past can be relentless about staying in the present.

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Lousie Hernan...thanks for the read :)

Simran said...

Wow! Loved it! :)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks Simy for the read

Umesh Awasthi said...

another good piece.
Honestly i liked the way you use words and express them

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

very nice, I wish there was a switch off button.

Jay Singh said...

Hi Valli,

What a coincidence,
"Who can listen to my midnight silent screams" and I'm just now listening to the Barfi title track on your site. Reminds me of how Barfi couldn't even express his emotions and angst vocally to anyone.

Lovely poetry once again Valli :)

Regards

Jay
My Blog | My FB Page

vinisha shah said...

fantabulous as always valli

AmitAag said...

Awesome poem, Valli!

Es Chris said...

The expressions and motive of the poem sound good, although the rhyming seemed a big forced.

Fizz Genuine said...

Love it...

Dr Sneha Rahatekar said...

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Panchali said...

aha....past has so much to say! Does it stop bothering..? No...it keeps haunting. So, don't let past ruin your present.
Passionate piece...and I loved this, Valli!!:))

Arumugam Easwar said...

Beautiful. Weaving of words with deep meaning comes easily to you. Kudos!

vandana sharma said...

First of all i love the way you have decorated your blog and yes nice poem too..:)

sathish kumar said...

twitchy touchy words

odyzz said...

Yeah !! past haunts and sometimes the prsent comes under the clutches of it..one needs a lot of courage to come out of it....beautifully penned as always...

Harshad Mehta said...

One has to be on guard to keep past away and not let it spoil present.

Excellent poem.

roopz said...

Past always haunts us even if we hate it following...I wonder why haven't I visited this blog before. Anyway thanks for sharing.

Regards
Village Girl

Sneo said...

give thy a break,
take a deep breath,
smell a lily,
live it up fully!

Khushbu Verma said...

I dun know what to say, i guess good and sad.
But on d top its very well written.
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deepak kripal said...

Beautiful poem once again. Oh past, don't hold me back.

Dr Sneha Rahatekar said...

wow!!!!!!!! awesome!! truely awesome

Dr Sneha Rahatekar said...

hey don't mind.. i am borrowing this pic!! :)

 

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