Friday, September 16, 2011

So close, yet so far






(Image taken from here)

"I should only win!!, Alright!??"
Do these lines end fight?

Do Ocean like words 'We'
split into rivers 'You' and 'Me' ?

Before, Our words were different, but they implied same feelings
But now, The same single word has got several meanings

At last,
Feelings changed, Memories remained
So close to each other we stay, Yet our hearts go in parallel way!


Telugu version of this poem : Here



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Saru Singhal said...

Seriously, the poem is very good, the thought, the rhyming, everything is perfect. I'm sorry, can't suggest a title as I think you can feel the poem better as it's your baby...

Being_AC said...

Every nice things comes out with an identity & package..

Here, I honestly propose a name of the poem- "me-fusion" derived from confusion :)
Good composition!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read Saru :)

Being_AC
Thanks for the read and suggesting a title

Ellecee said...

So nice Valli, and the picture is sweet.

a Rat said...

awesome lines valli... :)

Indrani said...

It may be just a passing phase.

Apni Kahaani said...

Must thank Indiblogger for giving opportunity to come across such a wonderful people like you....excellent Poem...Stay Blessed!

Debopam Banerjee said...

Nice one..........

mysay.in said...

nicely expressed emotions of tussles in affair.

readersheaven.org said...

Such beautiful lines .. differentiating the displit of love ! Nice one Valli

the little princess said...

very beautifully written...love the thought of how different words meant the same earlier but now even the same words mean different things..wow!

Vishnu Keloth said...

beautiful!!! seriously!! it touched me...especially the 3rd and 4th lines!!! wow!!

Hetal Kachalia said...

A perfect and a very relevant poem in today's time :)

Writing on the go

sushmitha said...

Lovely :) Nice one valli

Ritesh Agarwal said...

This was really good......one of ur best

mohamedali abdulkader said...

Super Expression and cute proposal அட... இப்படிச் சொன்னால் காதலை எப்படித்தான் மறுப்பது?'

mohamedali abdulkader said...

Awesome

Neha said...

nice one :)

Neha said...

Nice one :)

 

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