Friday, July 15, 2011

Feeling






Photo by Eliara

Feeling void, like the holes
Feeling dissatisfied, With unreached goals
Feeling helpless, Like flower being crushed
Feeling oblivious, With several thoughts being rushed
Feeling hopeless, like the bud that dried at early stage
Feeling homeless, With escape thoughts like that of parrot in the cage



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Fatima said...

Nice rhyming...

Take Care

Fiducia said...

Feeling ecstatic reading those thoughtful rhyming verses...wonderful work dear!! I hope those are not real, are they?

kiran said...

when evr i come here..i read my own feeling ...soooperb valli :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

It looks incomplete, where is the closure? There's only rife.

Regards,
Blasphemous Aesthete

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Fatima,Fiducia,Kiran,Blasphemous Aesthete
Thanks for the read :)

Cynthia said...

a beautiful [and truthful]
melancholy quality that I love.

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks Cynthia :)

Anonymous said...

like't sweety <3

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks Anonymous

Satya Rekha Ramaswamy said...

Thats so straight from the heart...
And only we girls can feel all these at the same time!

 

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