Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Will you?





Will you?
(Image taken from here)


If I've fallen and lost hope to get up once again
Will you lift me up and prevent me from going in vain?
If I've lost all the beauty and wealth which I earlier had
Will you accept me in the times good as well as bad?

If I am lost, and not in a position to regain my true self

Will you be on my side and guide me to reach myself?

If I am just nothing now
Will you still love me and make me everything somehow?
Will you?!!.....Will you?!


All I could hear was deep silence :(


P.s: They say that love is pure and unconditional, But now-a-days love stands on many conditions, since the world has turned too materialistic!!...True love is very rare and hard to find... This is bitter fact of life.......




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Cutie Pie (♥‿♥) said...

haHaa..Nyc linez,but I donn agree wid d last One..der must surely be some1 answerin You "Yes" but yu juz arent enuf close 2 Hear dem :)

PRANEETH said...

Bagundi....
was written like a letter in the form of poetry...:P

vaisakhi said...

nice lines....n well i believe silence speaks more than words...just see nconcntrat...:)

Simran said...

Cute poetry and beautifully defined the bitter truth!!

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

I wish the silence was accompanied with a nod, and a smile.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Valli said...

Prathi....Hmm...I hope that happens :)...Thanks for the read :)
Praneeth...Hmm...:P Thanks for the read :)

Vaisakhi...Thanks :)

Simran...Thanks :)

Blasphemous Aesthete...Yeah...Thanks for the read :)

Barkha Dhar said...

Wow! this is such a beautiful poem. Very true, love forgotten is love lost!
Thanks
Here's one of my popular post http://dharbarkha.blogspot.com/2010/08/say-no-to-dowry.html

Pranab said...

nice lines once again... I would have said yes I will :P. but you are right this world has turned materialistic.

sowmya said...

love is just to give;if we expect then; there starts a great disappointment in our life!!

God is true love!-coz he/she never expect anything from us!!

wow! nice poem..with loads of feel..

Valli said...

Barkha, Pranab, Soumya..Thanks for the read

Hemant said...

Beautifully crafted...

Being an optimistic..i agree with what Blasphemous Aesthete said...a silent with a nod and smile...

Valli said...

Thanks Hemant :)

Aakash Kokz said...

Beautiful poem, you are so very right.. True love is indeed very rare to find, very few people believe in true relationships, for the rest love is just fun ..

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Aakash :)

Panchali said...

Excellent flow of the poem, like a passion play:) But, it is sad to see love losing its strength...:(

Ghazala Hossain said...

Love is love and what is not love can never be love , enjoyed your questions :)

Bhavana Lalwani said...

Nice one .. simple yet touching words

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

I still believe there is someone who's ready to yes, but then will we put behind conditions...

indu chhibber said...

Valli this is superb-no words to describe the sensitivity of these lines-loved it!

Renju said...

Yeah, true love is hard to find. But once you found it you should never let it go for any reason. . for any reason. . coz once you loose it, your life wont be same anymore no matter what ever other happy things get added to your life. .Coz no one else can bring the same smile in your face like the person who loves you truly have gifted. . .
rgds,
Renju
http://www.renju-baby.blogspot.in/

Be_withme said...

Nice one ;0)

 

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