Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Strangers--->Friends--->Strangers






strangers to friends, friends to strangers

Two strangers became close friends
Shared everything with feelings so deep and intense

Slowly, situations changed and the conditions went bad
They lost their initial pure emotions for each other,
Which they earlier had

Gradually everything changed with the wind of time
Now, Both left out with memories bitter and sublime

When they face each other, they put a fake smile of pretense
And they are back again to strangers from friends



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THE DELUSIONAL REALITY said...

it feels so difficult when people who were once your buoy...move away as differences create a rift! :P

Simran said...

Hmm.it's a common issue now a days.
''Pal do pal ka saath fir tum kahaan hum kahaan''.
Nice one :)

Do read my Granny's poem on my blog:D
Take care ..

Fatima said...

Ah! I just wish it doesn't happen you know coz it hurts like hell...been through it so much that now I even doubt genuine emotions !!

Take Care.

Srikanth said...

Touching one.. Situational one for me..

"Some times beginnings aren't so simple.. some times Good bye is the Only way..." -- Linkin Park

snehambika said...

hmm it happens vallzz..but never mind..am sure 1day ul regain back yr same pure emotions:)..hope fr d best

Anonymous said...

Try until you find a good stranger.. Its always good to have happy ending ;) ..

*M*

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
that was a beautifully penned poem...the thought...it was excellent..and the words used were so apt...
See, the words havent left you...
:)
loved it...

Regards,
The Silhouette...

Valli said...

THE DELUSIONAL REALITY
Yeah :(
Thanks for the read

Simran
Thanks for the read...will check it out

Fatima
Yeah hurts like hell..:(
Thanks for the read

Srikanth
Yeah...Nice line :]
Thanks for the read

Sneha...
Hope so!
Thanks for the read

Maruthi
Hmmmm!...Will try :P
Thanks for the read

Eon..
Thanks for the read :]

Cutie Pie (♥‿♥) said...

Nice Dear...Loved it ,Guess evry1 kme across such situation in a lifetym ..Itz kind of Ok when we listen 2 our Heart nd break those walls :)

vaisakhi said...

somethin u see happnin almost everyday...love has turned out to be a game 4 most...so true...but people change things change situations change...nicely penned..

vaisakhi said...

somethin u see happnin almost everyday...love has turned out to be a game 4 most...so true...but people change things change situations change...nicely penned..

Hairyman said...

Life described so epically! Brilliant!

PRANEETH said...

Strangers are always strangers...
IF we feel them strangers...

kani friends are always friends though they be in contact are not...

Valli said...

Prathi...
YEah...Thanks for the read :]

Vaisakhi...
Thanks for the read :]

Hairyman...
Thanks for the read :]

Praneeth...
Friends are always friends, though we be in contact or not...(If we treat them as friends)
Thanks for the read :]

... Madhumathi ... said...

This happend.. to me!..
Good poem akka.. :)

Valli said...

ThanQ Madhu

some unspoken words said...

hey it happens many time.and in this virtual word it is so common. written very beautiful. keep going :)

Valli said...

some unspoken words...
Thanks for the read :]

Alcina said...

Simple words used to explain a whole big story..nicely done

Valli said...

ThanQ Alcina

rainboy said...

amazing friends terrible lovers

been at this place! Sometimes you think just what the fuck happened.

but time fades all :)

Valli said...

Yeah..:|
Thanks for the read Rainboy!

kapil said...

Very nice Valli :)
PS: I like the music on your blog.

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

It is very difficult to be strangers from friends, It is better not to know a person at all than feel a pang of bitterness everytime we happen to meet. nice poem.

Rahul Bhatia said...

Tranisitions in time:)

Green Speck said...

A beautiful story :-)

Bikramjit said...

hmmmm well such is a life .. although I am not sure how i will react if we came face to face :)


Bikram's

jayadevm said...

And the wheel turned yet again & they fell in love
But not with each other... or so it may seem from your poem.

Nice one!

Rupertt Wind said...

Thats so beautiful, You so candidly expressed something that happens in most marriages.

 

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