Wednesday, March 02, 2011

Moon vs Stars ☾★★





night moon and stars
(Image taken from here)

I wonder why people are fond of moon over stars
though it has invisible hidden scars

It changes its shape with the time and the season
Don't know what might be the reason

It is sometimes white, sometimes yellow
It never has the same original glow

It glows, stealing the radiance of the mighty sun
Stars have individuality, they don't depend on anyone

They shine with their own spark
They glitter like tiny lamps in the dark

Yes, stars are in million, Moon is unique and one
But, Moon got so much praise because stars are in million

Without stars, just imagine the sky!
'Ahh! It is incomplete!' I guess you would reply!!

P.s: This poem is just for fun...I am not against moon lovers..:P



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The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi
if not your paintings, even your verses are beautiful...
its a good thought that you have portrayed here...i liked the way you have put it...the expressions...lovely...sweet and simple...yet enchanting...

regards,
The Silhouette..

kiran said...

hahahha..valli...
nice one..
i donno the reason but i am in love wth moon... :):)

... Madhumathi ... said...

That's a good poem .. :D nd yeah.. evn i wonder.. y evry1 praise moon.. :) !!

I love the rhymings in ur poems :) simple n cute.. :)

Valli said...

ThanQ Silhouette...Glad that you found it enchanting...

ThanQ Kiran...Haha...I too like moon ...But love stars more than moon

ThanQ Madhumathi...Haha...Bingo and Hi-Five then...

keerthanatammana said...

I Loved eur poem bt I <3 mOOn too its doesnt mean I dunn lOv3 starS awww goD I hav many lOves :P

Valli said...

Keerthana...Hahaha..:D
Thanks for the read :)

Fatima said...

Hey it was a wonderful poem, on subject that I'm too fond off !

You know this poem can be understood in the direct manner too and it's got a more amazing meaning, as in looking at life and people in the context of moon and the stars !

Wonderfully written.
Keep writing :)

Take Care.

Valli said...

Hey ThanQ Fatima....
It's very good to hear that we can connect some points from this poem to life and ppl...:D

Yesha said...

I so love the moon. But I have nothing against your poem as well. :)

nika said...

hi valli.

nice poem. i also love your template. i'm not good with animations. hehe. have a nice day. :)

Valli said...

Yesha..ThanQ :)
Nika...ThanQ :)

Cherry said...

Moon Uses Sun[which is also a star] to shine.. like moon there are some people also :P

Valli said...

Cherry!
I agree! :D
Thanks for the read!

praneeth818 said...

Haha...Good one...
bagundi valli

Valli said...

ThanQ Praneeth!

Anonymous said...

sweet poem valli :o)

Valli said...

Anynoymous(Naaz)
ThanQ dear

some unspoken words said...

hey valli your pencil speaks omgnly in painting as well as in writing too.everything ur feelings,the way of writing,the way of rhyming,the way of designing ur blog was fantastic, its superb , amazing enchanting. I dont have words to describe that how good it was. well will u teach me that how do u design ur blogs??? plzzz

Vallz said...

ThanQ so much
"some unspoken words"

About what you wanna learn?
I didn't design blogs....But I used some javascripts searching from google..and from various sources

Alcina said...

Hey you got a beautiful blog..and the liveliness is incomparable..the poem is so true but everything has its own justified position.

i love the moon though :)

Valli said...

Alcina...ThanQ :]
Keep visiting

some unspoken words said...

hmm about ur pencil and heart icon i wana know vaali.

Vallz said...

@some unspoken words
I got those cursors form cursors-4u.com site dear :]

some unspoken words said...

oh thanks for the link vali :). soon i shall goona to apply it on my blog page.have a look and tell me hows that looking. -:)

Valli said...

OHkie...Welcome :]

Simran said...

Beautiful Blog with a wonderful post:)

Keep Writing :D

Valli said...

ThanQ Simran :]
Keep visiting my blog

sajeevkmenon said...

nice thoughts!

Valli said...

ThanQ Sajeev :)

sowmya said...

beautiful valli...just day before yesterday i wrote something on moon...when i saw ur post in indivine

first click & rushed to see ur thoughts which is really worth ...
:)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Hehe Thanks a lot Sowmya :)

SR Sweeya Pisupati said...

yeaaaaa ! a very good thought valli !! even moon lovers may b confused whether to cntinue on their same fav moon or to go wid ur stars :P

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Hehe..Thanks for the read Sweeya :)

Himani Agarwal said...

Hey nice one....Personally I like stars more than moon...:)

Himani

Vishal Rathod said...

Once again a nice one from you , This time it was comparison between two large bodies in heaven. All this happens because of uniqueness moon has over stars . Thats my reply

saikat mbka ghosh said...

perfect :) i mean its an incredible way to brought out the real life scenario of humans with d metaphor of stars and moon,,,brilliantly penned :)

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Akash Govindarajan said...

Just wow! What you have written is nothing we don't know already but it hasn't struck our minds until now! It easily relates to the people around us! Truly good poem!! :)

A Homemaker's Utopia said...

Lovely poem..Super like..:-)

Akshay Kumar G said...

Nice, be original and be unique. :)
PS: I love both moon and stars. :P

Fayaz Pasha said...

Hmm! Nice poem. I do know the reason and the reason why everybody loves moon is because:

TAARE ZAMEEN PAR hain! lol

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

twinkling starts have their own charm against moon who sometimes even fails to keep date.

But when moon is shining in its full glory in the sky, Yo can't help but admire its beauty, stars just pale in comparison.

Yo have written very well! I liked this thought!!

Cartic said...

so you are someone who prefers a starry night than a moon-lit one? Your blog template answers it I believe! I see some sparkling stars on the dark skies! :)

Ashish said...

Superb...!
what a comparison :)
stars as in your blog's background ? :P

CYNOSURE said...

hehe...although its for fun...but it was good...

loved the last two... :)

 

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