Wednesday, January 05, 2011

Irreparable





girl in depression and pain

Those wounds never heal,
which cut our heart deeply
with words that hit like an arrow
Those gaps never seal
established in our heart, wounded irrevocably
Time goes on, But those gaps never get narrow



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Aarti said...

Damn true :( Some empty space can never be filled .. I just loved the last line a lot , its so true , and painful too ..

Valli said...

ThanQ Aarti..:)

PRANEETH said...

Seems to be u are going very deep...

Valli said...

ThanQ Praneeth!

kiran said...

bored to write the same word excellent again and again.. :P :)

Vallz said...

Hehe...Kiran...ThanQ :D

... Madhumathi ... said...

True words in ur poem.. :) good one!

Valli said...

ThanQ Madhu..:)

THE DELUSIONAL REALITY said...

yeah...sometimes it's so hard to let go of certain things!
thumbs-up to dis one! :)

Valli said...

THE DELUSIONAL REALITY

ThanQ :)

Nandu said...

gud 1 :)

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Seems to be u are going very deep...
+1

:P :P

shail said...

How true!

Valli said...

Shail...:)
Thanks for your comment..:)

Hairyman said...

Sad but true. The misery phase clings on to one and feeds on all the feelings possible.
The only thing left behind are emotional scars that never heal.

Valli said...

Hairyman...Yeah exactly..:)

sathish kumar said...

poignant... and btw is the sequel between posts intentional!!?

Indian Satire said...

Those unkind words of friends
are more severe than the bullets of foes

the little princess said...

true..like they say, a cup once broken can be stuck, but the crack will always be there...nice!

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

True! I loved the way you rhymed it!

Sri Valli said...

Meenakshi, The Little Princess, Indian Satire, Sathish

Thanks for the read :)

@Sathish..Nope it was just a coincidence...

Mak said...

very true

indu chhibber said...

Oh this is very heart wrenching.Can't we make efforts to get out of this mode?Some wounds are deep as you say but time will heal with some help from us.

 

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