Tuesday, December 28, 2010

Oblivious






(Image taken from here)

I'm wandering soul
unaware of my goal
roaming here and there
unclear thoughts taking me nowhere :'(

I'm searching for stars in the day
In the night sky, I'm waiting for the rainbow to lay
I'm living in my own world of dreams
Everything over there, So beautiful it seems


I'm not ready to wake up and see
Breaking my illusions and setting myself free
And feel the ugly truth's essence
which has got the bitter reality's presence

No wonder, Some dreams are better than reality
Soothing to mind with no emotional calamity
But dreams are not forever, Wish they would be!
Because one fine day, I need to wake up,realize and see



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PRANEETH said...

Asalways rocking..

Sri Valli said...

ThanQ Praneeth!

Anonymous said...

simply superb n its true wid me:)

Sri Valli said...

ThanQ Sneha..:)

lucky said...

awwww wtg valli ;) wow

kiran said...

how can u write so nicely.. :)...very nice one...:D

Sri Valli said...

Lucky..ThanQ :D

Kiran..ThanQ Kiran..:)

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
Well, the thoughts that you portrayed are beautiful, but i somehow feel the write up could have been better...
overall, nice...

keerthanatammana said...

super akka >:D<

Anonymous said...

Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would you like to follow each others blogs? Advance Happy New Year. :D

Sri Valli said...

The Silhouette
ThanQ :)

Keerthana
ThanQ :)

Hello Kristina
Happy new year

гαvι said...

excellent one !!

Anonymous said...

I really hope that he survived that terrible accident. :(

Followed your blog back.

Sri Valli said...

Ravi..ThanQ :)
Kristina :)

Aniqua said...

Awesome work..Truly <3

Sri Valli said...

Aniqua
ThanQ dear...:)

Ordinary Gal said...

awesome rhyme once again :)

Sri Valli said...

Ordinary girl

Thank You :)

Shriti said...

loved it :)

Sri Valli said...

Chocolate lover ThanQ :)

Pranab said...

WOW !!!
awesome... :-)Liked the rhyme.. how could u do that so smoothly... Keep it up.

Sri Valli said...

Thanq Pranab :)

Deepika Vasudeva said...

great one yr...
this one feels to be from deepest of heart... loved the emotions and and innocence u hv in writing.. feels alike mine.

Sri Valli said...

Deepika...ThanQ so much..:)

Unknown said...

hey...thanks a lot for following my blog!
this poem is really beautiful...
love your blog..happy new year! :)

Sri Valli said...

The Delusional Beauty

ThanQ :)
Wish you a very Happy New Year..

jpdas said...

good verses i liked them. poetry lovers find a welcome place here.

Sri Valli said...

Jpdas...ThanQ :)

Defiant said...

Wow.. dis is a gud poem.. :) 1 of d best in urs.. ;)

Sri Valli said...

ThanQ Madhumathi..:)

Unknown said...

very nice! keep it up. peace and love from south africa

Sri Valli said...

Yakattack

Thank you..:)

Manasa said...

Very Pure and delicate!! Loved it!!

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Sridhar, Manasa :)

Vinay Leo R. said...

True.. Sometimes, dreams are better than reality.. but it is nice to have them and not think of reality too :) Maybe thats why they're so beautiful...

Sri Valli said...

Yeah true Leo..Thanks for the read :)

zulfan said...

keep strong.. :D

Unknown said...

hello valli,
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