Tuesday, December 28, 2010

Oblivious






(Image taken from here)

I'm wandering soul
unaware of my goal
roaming here and there
unclear thoughts taking me nowhere :'(

I'm searching for stars in the day
In the night sky, I'm waiting for the rainbow to lay
I'm living in my own world of dreams
Everything over there, So beautiful it seems


I'm not ready to wake up and see
Breaking my illusions and setting myself free
And feel the ugly truth's essence
which has got the bitter reality's presence

No wonder, Some dreams are better than reality
Soothing to mind with no emotional calamity
But dreams are not forever, Wish they would be!
Because one fine day, I need to wake up,realize and see



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PRANEETH said...

Asalways rocking..

Valli said...

ThanQ Praneeth!

snehambika said...

simply superb n its true wid me:)

Valli said...

ThanQ Sneha..:)

lucky said...

awwww wtg valli ;) wow

kiran said...

how can u write so nicely.. :)...very nice one...:D

Valli said...

Lucky..ThanQ :D

Kiran..ThanQ Kiran..:)

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi
Well, the thoughts that you portrayed are beautiful, but i somehow feel the write up could have been better...
overall, nice...

keerthanatammana said...

super akka >:D<

❥ ќʀɨsтɨиɑ said...

Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would you like to follow each others blogs? Advance Happy New Year. :D

Valli said...

The Silhouette
ThanQ :)

Keerthana
ThanQ :)

Hello Kristina
Happy new year

гαvι said...

excellent one !!

❥ ќʀɨsтɨиɑ said...

I really hope that he survived that terrible accident. :(

Followed your blog back.

Valli said...

Ravi..ThanQ :)
Kristina :)

Aniqua said...

Awesome work..Truly <3

Valli said...

Aniqua
ThanQ dear...:)

Ordinary Gal said...

awesome rhyme once again :)

Valli said...

Ordinary girl

Thank You :)

Chocolate Lover said...

loved it :)

Valli said...

Chocolate lover ThanQ :)

Pranab said...

WOW !!!
awesome... :-)Liked the rhyme.. how could u do that so smoothly... Keep it up.

Valli said...

Thanq Pranab :)

Deepika said...

great one yr...
this one feels to be from deepest of heart... loved the emotions and and innocence u hv in writing.. feels alike mine.

Valli said...

Deepika...ThanQ so much..:)

THE DELUSIONAL REALITY said...

hey...thanks a lot for following my blog!
this poem is really beautiful...
love your blog..happy new year! :)

Valli said...

The Delusional Beauty

ThanQ :)
Wish you a very Happy New Year..

jpdas said...

good verses i liked them. poetry lovers find a welcome place here.

Valli said...

Jpdas...ThanQ :)

... Madhumathi ... said...

Wow.. dis is a gud poem.. :) 1 of d best in urs.. ;)

Valli said...

ThanQ Madhumathi..:)

Yakattack said...

very nice! keep it up. peace and love from south africa

Valli said...

Yakattack

Thank you..:)

Sridhar said...

Awesome.

Manasa said...

Very Pure and delicate!! Loved it!!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Sridhar, Manasa :)

Leo said...

True.. Sometimes, dreams are better than reality.. but it is nice to have them and not think of reality too :) Maybe thats why they're so beautiful...

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Yeah true Leo..Thanks for the read :)

zulfan said...

keep strong.. :D

pranjal kamra said...

hello valli,
I would really like to congratulate your for a blog which is to me, the best blog on the entire web. Your blog serves my various needs.....it is a music player when I am working on something or drafting those boring documents on word. It is a counsellor when I am depressed and my place to learn the art of writing ! thank you soo much for making this blog an integral part of my cyber life and I really do hope that I may learn from ur exceptional skills

 

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